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Array ( [sid] => 163440 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => YOU WILL NEVER LOVE ME [time] => 2010-11-27 02:21:54 [hometext] => Loving someone, but not feeling the same love back can be difficult to take. [bodytext] => I just want to hold you close
To feel you everyday
I just want to see you dance
And hear each word you say
These are hopes and dreams I have
Of a love I'll never see
All I know is you will not love me

I just want to tell you how
You make my heart race
I just want to stand with you
In this open space
It is pointless for me to say
How I'd like it to be
All I know is you will not love me

Why do I feel this way
When I look at you?
Why am I all alone?
What can I do?

I just want to let you go
And forget you exist
But my mind is racing round
Of things that I might miss
I should just get on with my life
And end this fantasy
Because I know you will never love me [comments] => 3 [counter] => 198 [topic] => 2 [informant] => chrisdavid [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

YOU WILL NEVER LOVE ME

Contributed by chrisdavid on Saturday, 27th November 2010 @ 02:21:54 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

I just want to hold you close
To feel you everyday
I just want to see you dance
And hear each word you say
These are hopes and dreams I have
Of a love I'll never see
All I know is you will not love me

I just want to tell you how
You make my heart race
I just want to stand with you
In this open space
It is pointless for me to say
How I'd like it to be
All I know is you will not love me

Why do I feel this way
When I look at you?
Why am I all alone?
What can I do?

I just want to let you go
And forget you exist
But my mind is racing round
Of things that I might miss
I should just get on with my life
And end this fantasy
Because I know you will never love me

Copyright © chrisdavid ... [ 2010-11-27 02:21:54]
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Re: YOU WILL NEVER LOVE ME (User Rating: 1 )
by Eclipse_of_the_Moon on Saturday, 27th November 2010 @ 02:30:25 PM AEST
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This tore at my heart. The Love you can give someone, but you never get it in return... I know how that feels.

Re: YOU WILL NEVER LOVE ME (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 27th November 2010 @ 04:10:16 PM AEST
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So sad but I know the feeling.
Love sucks some times.
Great writing even in the sadness.
Personally I think cupid should practice more on the target before he starts shooting arrows at random.
smiles, blessings,
emy

Re: YOU WILL NEVER LOVE ME (User Rating: 1 )
by Fern on Monday, 29th November 2010 @ 01:03:12 PM AEST
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It's such a sad fact of life to love someone and not be loved in return. It happens to almost everyone. But...after wallowing in your misery for a while, pick yourself up and mount a new search. There's someone who will love you so very much...someone that you've not yet met. Your poem is excellently written. I've read it and re-read it several times. You have a wonderfully honest and direct way of describing what your poem is all about. Hope you find true love, and I hope for our sake (your audience) that you continue writing poetry.

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