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Seducing office ties

Wanting pockets gold

Approach and dream boy

Wall Street opens wide

The cliffs begin to peak

Morality breaks in beads

A grin for future reduction

His fix temp to fire

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The Girls In Red

Contributed by duff on Saturday, 13th November 2010 @ 11:40:51 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

The pretty girls of glass

Seducing office ties

Wanting pockets gold

Approach and dream boy

Wall Street opens wide

The cliffs begin to peak

Morality breaks in beads

A grin for future reduction

His fix temp to fire

Copyright © duff ... [ 2010-11-13 11:40:51]
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Re: The Girls In Red (User Rating: 1 )
by cashfan1 on Sunday, 14th November 2010 @ 02:08:37 AM AEST
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Hi Duff
I must say I am liking your work more and more. This is full of dark images and I love the way you express yourself. Well written my friend, I look forward to more.

Re: The Girls In Red (User Rating: 1 )
by northernlights on Sunday, 14th November 2010 @ 07:48:03 AM AEST
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The complete metaphor and process of seduction,with the price tag attached in one wonderfully expressive sharp as a knife observation of the age old game of predator and prey now that's class!

Re: The Girls In Red (User Rating: 1 )
by ming on Sunday, 14th November 2010 @ 08:37:18 AM AEST
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Nice! Love this line;
'Morality breaks in beads'

ming

Re: The Girls In Red (User Rating: 1 )
by UNORTHODOX on Sunday, 14th November 2010 @ 09:47:13 AM AEST
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Part of me filled with sorrow and tears,
another part with understanding,
but in the end I saw life for what it is,
while this passage is nothing short of stunning
truely your fluency is superb

-UNORTHODOX

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