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Array ( [sid] => 163123 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Run Away. [time] => 2010-11-09 05:17:54 [hometext] => This was originally going to be a sort of sequel to my poem, 'Run Away Together', but as I started writing it, it changed considerably. I may write a sequel sometime however. Also, I'm submitting this on my mobile, so please excuse any typos! [bodytext] => I just want to run away,
All on my own,
I'm pretty sure that I'd be better off,
Going it alone,
I don't need your hand to hold,
Your eyes to get me through the day,
I'm fine without you now,
And I'll be fine when I run away,
I'm sick of so much conformity,
I just want to feel something real,
I want to be somewhere that I can,
Eventually learn to heal,
There's nothing to make me stay here,
Only things to make me go,
You don't think I'll do it but,
There's so much you'll never know,
You needn't bother getting in touch,
There's nothing left to say,
You're not the reason I'm leaving,
And you won't be the reason I stay. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 239 [topic] => 32 [informant] => Bexstasy [notes] => Corrected spelling as requested ~ Moderator_18 Nov 9, 2010 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )
Run Away.

Contributed by Bexstasy on Tuesday, 9th November 2010 @ 05:17:54 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



I just want to run away,
All on my own,
I'm pretty sure that I'd be better off,
Going it alone,
I don't need your hand to hold,
Your eyes to get me through the day,
I'm fine without you now,
And I'll be fine when I run away,
I'm sick of so much conformity,
I just want to feel something real,
I want to be somewhere that I can,
Eventually learn to heal,
There's nothing to make me stay here,
Only things to make me go,
You don't think I'll do it but,
There's so much you'll never know,
You needn't bother getting in touch,
There's nothing left to say,
You're not the reason I'm leaving,
And you won't be the reason I stay.




Copyright © Bexstasy ... [ 2010-11-09 05:17:54]
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Re: Run Away. (User Rating: 1 )
by bleedinheart on Tuesday, 9th November 2010 @ 12:11:54 PM AEST
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very good and ture wish i could run away


Re: Run Away. (User Rating: 1 )
by jamesatteb on Saturday, 13th November 2010 @ 09:28:48 AM AEST
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I love your writing ,the emotions are so raw and real just like mine,seems we have been through similar things before and it shows through our writings.
keep it up ,you do beautiful work ! :)


Re: Run Away. (User Rating: 1 )
by sidneyconrad23 on Saturday, 20th November 2010 @ 04:36:51 AM AEST
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Good job loved the way you used the words keep using that gift you have.


Re: Run Away. (User Rating: 1 )
by chrisdavid on Monday, 22nd November 2010 @ 12:46:43 PM AEST
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Strong words you've written here. Is running away from it all the right decision? Or the easy decision? Only you make that choice.
Chris.


Re: Run Away. (User Rating: 1 )
by huwbeauty on Wednesday, 8th December 2010 @ 03:19:40 AM AEST
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really nice writing,to the point and with honesty.




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