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Array ( [sid] => 16260 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Insomnia [time] => 2003-04-19 23:45:00 [hometext] => (About a forbidden love; unable to tell anyone.) [bodytext] => During the night you come up to my window
To bring yourself another sorrow
Pretty moon will start to crumble
You never think about tomorrow

Death warrant on my door
All the sins come back for more
You kissed the wall a thousand times before
And all is rotten to the core

Wishful thinking won't work tonight
I've been sinking in a glass of wine
I've been drinking the wrong kind
I've been thinking

And there's too much on my mind

My insomnia is like a crime you unconsciously commit every night
But if we are known to be modest, you and I should take the blame ourselves
And leave the honour to the others

I never dream and tell... [comments] => 2 [counter] => 184 [topic] => 48 [informant] => Chenobi [notes] => [ihome] => 1 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Insomnia

Contributed by Chenobi on Saturday, 19th April 2003 @ 11:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

During the night you come up to my window
To bring yourself another sorrow
Pretty moon will start to crumble
You never think about tomorrow

Death warrant on my door
All the sins come back for more
You kissed the wall a thousand times before
And all is rotten to the core

Wishful thinking won't work tonight
I've been sinking in a glass of wine
I've been drinking the wrong kind
I've been thinking

And there's too much on my mind

My insomnia is like a crime you unconsciously commit every night
But if we are known to be modest, you and I should take the blame ourselves
And leave the honour to the others

I never dream and tell...

Copyright © Chenobi ... [ 2003-04-19 23:45:00]
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Re: Insomnia (User Rating: 1 )
by Silent-Cry on Sunday, 27th April 2003 @ 12:50:09 PM AEST
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"My insomnia is like a crime you unconsciously commit every night "i loved it...this poem is so well written ,so beautiful...so WONDERFUL!i can't find the words...

Re: Insomnia (User Rating: 1 )
by littlemo911 on Monday, 12th May 2003 @ 11:12:11 PM AEST
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i love the simile that you added in the poem. the poem is really good.

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