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You And I
Contributed by
suzyo
on
Thursday, 23rd September 2010 @ 05:51:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
war
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In this ever changing world of fear Someone must pay the cost For another political error Or yet another young life lost But you or I can't stand our ground Or find our peace of mind Whether we want to believe it or not We are running out of time There is famine and disaster Blood, and sweat, and tears But this hasn't happened recently It's been going on for years The violence seems to escalate With every passing day As someone else gets shot at Or a murderers put away There are little tiny children Defenceless in the street Strung between temptation And all the worlds beliefs But you or I can't do much We are just two helpless souls Strung between the reality of Our personal dreams and goals We could yell and scream and rampage Then maybe for a day The world will stop and listen To what we have to say But once our minds have spoken And we've done the best we can Someone will soon disagree They just don't give a damn I hear everybody asking How can I be so scared The future still holds so much But no-body REALLY cared With all the war and violence Going on in the world today Can I really call myself human To react any other way.
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suzyo
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2010-09-23 05:51:26] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: You And I
(User Rating: 1 ) by Bexstasy on
Thursday, 23rd September 2010 @ 09:11:19 AM AEST (User
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| Wow, this is a really powerful poem! |
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Re: You And I
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Thursday, 23rd September 2010 @ 09:38:35 PM AEST (User
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I agree, very powerful.
first I do appreciat4 all of our military even tho I may not agree with our government at times.
It really is enlightening to here one that's been there.
I could go on and about my thoughts and feelings but I think you summed it up really well.
Great job.
huggs, blessings, peace,
emy |
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Re: You And I
(User Rating: 1 ) by Hooligan785 on
Sunday, 26th September 2010 @ 04:25:22 AM AEST (User
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| I really like the texture of this poem and the way it touches base with the problems we are having today....My poetrue is of the same texture as yours ecspescially "Innocent" and "Voiceless" so check them out and give me some input... |
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