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Array ( [sid] => 162239 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => To End My Strife... [time] => 2010-09-10 03:24:21 [hometext] => I wrote this poem a while ago when I going through a hard time and feeling very low... [bodytext] => Watching freedom is painful,
For those locked away,
Seeing joy, love and happiness,
Another price that I pay,

I wish I could get help,
I wish it would go away,
Maybe if I keep praying real hard,
It will someday,

But I致e been pushed down so many times,
I feel this time will be the last,
As I lay here fading,
My thoughts invaded by memories of my past,

Lock it all up inside of you,
What a full load,
Watch out for that one day,
When it all just explodes,

Some would same I知 psycho,
Some would say I知 weird,
It痴 like I知 a different person,
And the old me disappeared,

I feel the pressures of shame and rejection building,
As I lay here on the floor,
I have no strength to get up,
I知 not worth it anymore,

I hate it when I cry,
Weakness in my eyes,
That is why I always hide,
Behind my fake disguise,

Seeing everyday through,
But as if it痴 my last,
I may take my life,
It may be taken fast,

I知 losing control,
I知 going through despair,
When other girls are wondering,
Just what they should wear,

I知 living in the dark,
Just trying to hide away,
I知 losing hope and happiness,
It happens everyday,

I知 building myself up,
To finally take my life, maybe some pills,
My moment to be happy,
And fight between my wills,

Ana and depression,
Both taking over my life,
When my only satisfaction,
Is to end my strife...
[comments] => 1 [counter] => 106 [topic] => 36 [informant] => neverlosehope [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )
To End My Strife...

Contributed by neverlosehope on Friday, 10th September 2010 @ 03:24:21 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



Watching freedom is painful,
For those locked away,
Seeing joy, love and happiness,
Another price that I pay,

I wish I could get help,
I wish it would go away,
Maybe if I keep praying real hard,
It will someday,

But I致e been pushed down so many times,
I feel this time will be the last,
As I lay here fading,
My thoughts invaded by memories of my past,

Lock it all up inside of you,
What a full load,
Watch out for that one day,
When it all just explodes,

Some would same I知 psycho,
Some would say I知 weird,
It痴 like I知 a different person,
And the old me disappeared,

I feel the pressures of shame and rejection building,
As I lay here on the floor,
I have no strength to get up,
I知 not worth it anymore,

I hate it when I cry,
Weakness in my eyes,
That is why I always hide,
Behind my fake disguise,

Seeing everyday through,
But as if it痴 my last,
I may take my life,
It may be taken fast,

I知 losing control,
I知 going through despair,
When other girls are wondering,
Just what they should wear,

I知 living in the dark,
Just trying to hide away,
I知 losing hope and happiness,
It happens everyday,

I知 building myself up,
To finally take my life, maybe some pills,
My moment to be happy,
And fight between my wills,

Ana and depression,
Both taking over my life,
When my only satisfaction,
Is to end my strife...




Copyright ﾂｩ neverlosehope ... [ 2010-09-10 03:24:21]
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Re: To End My Strife... (User Rating: 1 )
by chrisdavid on Saturday, 11th September 2010 @ 02:32:07 AM AEST
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You write here as if the end is nigh, it's so sad. You write so well and express your emotions well. The reader can feel your grief.
Have you now overcome all of this? I'd be interested to know.
Take care, Chris.




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