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Array ( [sid] => 162154 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I Firmly Tell, Earth Is Hell [time] => 2010-09-04 20:56:28 [hometext] => By sorrow I am attacked, Peace cannot be tracked, Happiness I have lacked, I am by none backed, So a poem with sorrow packed. [bodytext] => Deep sorrow into my heart falls
World seems to be fully false

People doing black-mailing
True men miserably failing

All live with a cheating motive
And noble acts turning abortive

Our tears give all deep enjoyment
Our victories supply resentment

When we cry in deep pain
All rejoice having gain

When success we receive
A cunning plot all weave

Our progress is not cherished
Our hopes are demolished

None likes at all our being brave
Instead they want us to be slave

If we give a positive expression
All want us to suffer depression

If we exhibit our fine talent
Evil plots all try to invent

Our dejection if is displayed
If we are by demons preyed

This gives to all greatest ecstasy
Or else all seethe with jealousy

When we lose and suffer loss
All thank with joy God-boss

If we are driven toward agony
All feel life is funny and sunny

When we suffer maximum damage
All talk like a sagacious sage

When by fate we are kicked
All love our getting tricked

When we struggle to make a living
Further troubles all will be giving

This World is in fact a jungle
All view it from a bad angle

No one likes anyone's success
All show hatred in excess

World is gradually going to dogs
Venomously into brain each logs

Love, affection, mercy and kindness
Are totally removed with firmness

Best method is to believe in the unknown
And everything positive must be shown.

M V VENKATARAMAN
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I Firmly Tell, Earth Is Hell

Contributed by mvvenkataraman on Saturday, 4th September 2010 @ 08:56:28 PM in AEST
Topic: anguished



Deep sorrow into my heart falls
World seems to be fully false

People doing black-mailing
True men miserably failing

All live with a cheating motive
And noble acts turning abortive

Our tears give all deep enjoyment
Our victories supply resentment

When we cry in deep pain
All rejoice having gain

When success we receive
A cunning plot all weave

Our progress is not cherished
Our hopes are demolished

None likes at all our being brave
Instead they want us to be slave

If we give a positive expression
All want us to suffer depression

If we exhibit our fine talent
Evil plots all try to invent

Our dejection if is displayed
If we are by demons preyed

This gives to all greatest ecstasy
Or else all seethe with jealousy

When we lose and suffer loss
All thank with joy God-boss

If we are driven toward agony
All feel life is funny and sunny

When we suffer maximum damage
All talk like a sagacious sage

When by fate we are kicked
All love our getting tricked

When we struggle to make a living
Further troubles all will be giving

This World is in fact a jungle
All view it from a bad angle

No one likes anyone's success
All show hatred in excess

World is gradually going to dogs
Venomously into brain each logs

Love, affection, mercy and kindness
Are totally removed with firmness

Best method is to believe in the unknown
And everything positive must be shown.

M V VENKATARAMAN




Copyright © mvvenkataraman ... [ 2010-09-04 20:56:28]
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Re: I Firmly Tell, Earth Is Hell (User Rating: 1 )
by irisblue on Sunday, 5th September 2010 @ 11:26:23 AM AEST
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Very profound write. Every stanza has such deep meaning. I know where you are coming from on this. I Love the last stanza, I know now that nothing or no one can take away how much God loves us. I am working on focusing on the present , and finding things that make me happy. Thank you for such a amazing poem.



Re: I Firmly Tell, Earth Is Hell (User Rating: 1 )
by thebadguy9999 on Sunday, 5th September 2010 @ 09:05:09 PM AEST
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nice


Re: I Firmly Tell, Earth Is Hell (User Rating: 1 )
by Bexstasy on Saturday, 11th September 2010 @ 09:28:17 AM AEST
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I really really enjoyed reading this!




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