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Array ( [sid] => 161989 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Burnt Bridges [time] => 2010-08-23 23:47:18 [hometext] => [bodytext] => So tell me why
I should even try
now that you need saving
when
I still remember the night
you said our love was a lie
and that you were always faking,
or how about those times
I felt like I would die
as my heart was breaking.

so tell me why
I should try
come on
tell me one more lie,
I can't do it anymore
it took me time
but
I got over you,
I have no reason to try
so go on and cry
cause you ain't worth saving.
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Burnt Bridges

Contributed by unknown_utopia on Monday, 23rd August 2010 @ 11:47:18 PM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry

So tell me why
I should even try
now that you need saving
when
I still remember the night
you said our love was a lie
and that you were always faking,
or how about those times
I felt like I would die
as my heart was breaking.

so tell me why
I should try
come on
tell me one more lie,
I can't do it anymore
it took me time
but
I got over you,
I have no reason to try
so go on and cry
cause you ain't worth saving.

Copyright © unknown_utopia ... [ 2010-08-23 23:47:18]
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Re: Burnt Bridges (User Rating: 1 )
by simonwrite on Tuesday, 24th August 2010 @ 02:27:03 AM AEST
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me amo

Re: Burnt Bridges (User Rating: 1 )
by allforyou on Tuesday, 24th August 2010 @ 05:56:32 AM AEST
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I always get so excited when I see you've posted something. This was great. Full of emotion, and you expressed it well. I love how it started off, "So tell me why, I should even try, now that you need saving." I think we've all been in the kind of give and take relationship where "I give and you take." Look at me, I'm rambling as always. Great write.

-Kara

Re: Burnt Bridges (User Rating: 1 )
by pinkunicornoctober on Thursday, 9th September 2010 @ 04:39:32 PM AEST
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Great poem! This is the first poem of your's I've read but I am really impressed! I can't wait to read the other one's!

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