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Array ( [sid] => 161964 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Somebody Up There [time] => 2010-08-22 21:23:28 [hometext] => [bodytext] => It's very clear
that
there is something there,
I can feel
its presence
all around.

you can't see it
but
you know it's there
watching over you....
When you're down and out
it
shows you someone cares
you are not alone.

When you're feeling pain
it comes in to save
when you can't find your way
it'll be there,
as you feel sanity fade
and you
think no one cares
that's when you'll know it's near.

I can't explain it
no I haven't seen it
but
I know it's there.
[comments] => 4 [counter] => 215 [topic] => 48 [informant] => unknown_utopia [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Somebody Up There

Contributed by unknown_utopia on Sunday, 22nd August 2010 @ 09:23:28 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

It's very clear
that
there is something there,
I can feel
its presence
all around.

you can't see it
but
you know it's there
watching over you....
When you're down and out
it
shows you someone cares
you are not alone.

When you're feeling pain
it comes in to save
when you can't find your way
it'll be there,
as you feel sanity fade
and you
think no one cares
that's when you'll know it's near.

I can't explain it
no I haven't seen it
but
I know it's there.

Copyright © unknown_utopia ... [ 2010-08-22 21:23:28]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Somebody Up There (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 23rd August 2010 @ 12:47:15 AM AEST
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It's magic.
Always there when you need it the most.
Blessings,
emy

Re: Somebody Up There (User Rating: 1 )
by cashfan1 on Monday, 23rd August 2010 @ 04:00:01 AM AEST
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Another wonderful piece, so well writen it just jumps off the page. well done.

Re: Somebody Up There (User Rating: 1 )
by JustinLW on Thursday, 26th August 2010 @ 08:15:27 PM AEST
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This is a great piece. Very impressive!

Re: Somebody Up There (User Rating: 1 )
by Fern on Friday, 27th August 2010 @ 01:09:53 PM AEST
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Very well thought out poem. You're obviously a spiritual person of the highest order. Some people call what you're talking about God...others, a higher intellect. Whatever or whoever you're writing about is right on! We've all come to grips with tragedy of one kind or another during the course of our lives and eventually found peace through prayer or meditation on some level. There's someone far more powerful than us who is listening to our desperate voice when we're, sad, sick, broken-hearted...who is it? Hmmm...

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