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The silhouette of life stains
topaz red.

Perpetually stalking sideways,
atop this side less sphere.

Taunting
from north to south,
it finds agony
In mediums never near.

Parallel to farther than perceived,
It begs hopelessly for
collisions appease.

Continuously a ray
From a point ill conceived.

Its confusion befalls
upon incomprehensive disbelief.

Weeping sorrowful of its setting moment of lust.

When dawn’s welcoming wakeful touch,
sets somberly
Slipping through its lanky clutch.

As cold betrays warmth
Into

dusk.
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THE SILHOUETTE OF LIFE.(DUSK)

Contributed by andrewjones12 on Tuesday, 10th August 2010 @ 10:48:48 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

Once upon a vision’s edge....

The silhouette of life stains
topaz red.

Perpetually stalking sideways,
atop this side less sphere.

Taunting
from north to south,
it finds agony
In mediums never near.

Parallel to farther than perceived,
It begs hopelessly for
collisions appease.

Continuously a ray
From a point ill conceived.

Its confusion befalls
upon incomprehensive disbelief.

Weeping sorrowful of its setting moment of lust.

When dawn’s welcoming wakeful touch,
sets somberly
Slipping through its lanky clutch.

As cold betrays warmth
Into

dusk.

Copyright Â© andrewjones12 ... [ 2010-08-10 10:48:48]
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Re: THE SILHOUETTE OF LIFE.(DUSK) (User Rating: 1 )
by beccaboo4400 on Tuesday, 10th August 2010 @ 11:21:03 AM AEST
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wow tht was amazing........i expect to be reading more from u. :)

Re: THE SILHOUETTE OF LIFE.(DUSK) (User Rating: 1 )
by joydeep_nath on Tuesday, 10th August 2010 @ 11:47:27 AM AEST
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nicely wriiten..just the way a poem should be!

Re: THE SILHOUETTE OF LIFE.(DUSK) (User Rating: 1 )
by cashfan1 on Tuesday, 10th August 2010 @ 12:14:09 PM AEST
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Andrew
another breath taking piece of work I love the subject matter and the way your words flow right off the page, Look forward to more.

Re: THE SILHOUETTE OF LIFE.(DUSK) (User Rating: 1 )
by thebadguy9999 on Tuesday, 10th August 2010 @ 02:22:33 PM AEST
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nice

Re: THE SILHOUETTE OF LIFE.(DUSK) (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 10th August 2010 @ 09:27:05 PM AEST
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This is totally mesmerizing !
smiles,
emy

Re: THE SILHOUETTE OF LIFE.(DUSK) (User Rating: 1 )
by mehuel on Wednesday, 11th August 2010 @ 12:30:19 AM AEST
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very beautiful composition... And what an end "as cold betrays warmth into dusk"... Mesmerizing indeed...

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