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Array ( [sid] => 16168 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => The Unknown Can Kill [time] => 2003-04-17 19:05:00 [hometext] => This unknown, undaunted, way of life that causes most cases of strife, Is drugs. Something we should all be afraid of. In our teenage years and our grown up years. [bodytext] => When it is bright,
It comes upon thee.
When it is night,
It makes you beg on one knee.

It makes you leave the room,
It makes you go numb
It will lead you to doom.
It値l make you feel like scum

It will not let you feel bliss,
It want let you be thin
It will not let you feel love like this
It値l make you want to take aspirin.

It will lead you to death
It will end your life
It will make you take your last breath
It値l add to your strife

It will make you feel pain
It will make you be dumb
It will make you want to be slain
It値l make you a bum.

It will make you feel the suffering
It will make you feel dread
You will feel like your rotting
Now you will want to be dead.
[comments] => 1 [counter] => 189 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Val [notes] => [ihome] => 1 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 2 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
The Unknown Can Kill

Contributed by Val on Thursday, 17th April 2003 @ 07:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



When it is bright,
It comes upon thee.
When it is night,
It makes you beg on one knee.

It makes you leave the room,
It makes you go numb
It will lead you to doom.
It値l make you feel like scum

It will not let you feel bliss,
It want let you be thin
It will not let you feel love like this
It値l make you want to take aspirin.

It will lead you to death
It will end your life
It will make you take your last breath
It値l add to your strife

It will make you feel pain
It will make you be dumb
It will make you want to be slain
It値l make you a bum.

It will make you feel the suffering
It will make you feel dread
You will feel like your rotting
Now you will want to be dead.




Copyright ﾂｩ Val ... [ 2003-04-17 19:05:00]
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Re: The Unknown Can Kill (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 15th March 2004 @ 02:25:56 PM AEST
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I loved it, and can't wait to read more :-)




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