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I'm sad, you too
You're like toys
Come back, my heart
Your home is unknown

Time to lose
Untie my tie
My brother deludes

Wire the knobs
Tie my time
My mother devote

Lie my cry
Get sweet time
Be strong like you
Your soul your sound

Yourself
Tie my time
Unlock my love
Get sweet time
Dead strong like you

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Rotten Fool

Contributed by EdwardAdelin on Friday, 6th August 2010 @ 03:38:43 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Tired, You crawl
I'm sad, you too
You're like toys
Come back, my heart
Your home is unknown

Time to lose
Untie my tie
My brother deludes

Wire the knobs
Tie my time
My mother devote

Lie my cry
Get sweet time
Be strong like you
Your soul your sound

Yourself
Tie my time
Unlock my love
Get sweet time
Dead strong like you

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Re: Rotten Fool (User Rating: 1 )
by iodinelove on Friday, 6th August 2010 @ 10:47:58 PM AEST
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I don't say this often, but I don't have a clue as to what you're talking about in this. Care to enlighten me?

Always, Abraham

Re: Rotten Fool (User Rating: 1 )
by EdwardAdelin on Saturday, 7th August 2010 @ 03:29:13 AM AEST
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It's about a split personality person, or sutiation (suit yourself) That "person" is gone and the "character" is trying to call him back.It's a sick game between reality and fantasy. Heartbroken ego gives the smell of a dying part in your veins. It relates with both family and friends. Emotions and fears. Love... It's about solitude and the need of someone who will be strong enought to help and care.

Re: Rotten Fool (User Rating: 1 )
by colt540 on Saturday, 7th August 2010 @ 03:50:56 PM AEST
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Very Nice Rhythm and it is easy to follow, not as dark as i thought the title portrayed it to be, none the less good.

Re: Rotten Fool (User Rating: 1 )
by EdwardAdelin on Saturday, 7th August 2010 @ 06:45:55 PM AEST
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Lately there's music in my head. Those sincere words are like lyrics to me.

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