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Array ( [sid] => 161593 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Friday the 13th [time] => 2010-08-03 11:51:48 [hometext] => This was written last year, the day before Valentines Day, at my boyfriend. Yes, we're still together. [bodytext] => It's cold today.
At least it seems like it's 20 degrees under
100
Things run through my mind
Or maybe it's just you.
Walking home alone again
With Last Song blasting in my ears
I want to make them bleed
A legitimate reason to cry
Because I love you so much,
It hurts here in my soul.
Because I love you so much,
It hurts me as a whole.

And the world keeps turning
No matter how hard I try to make it
And I said once that if things don't work,
I can see us staying friends
But I can see me hating you
Because I hate you
Because I love you

The sky is an ocean of grey, rolling clouds
And they're laughing at my somberness
I put on a smile until I'm out of view
Then I put it in my pocket till I can see you once again
Now I notice the snowflakes that dance in the wind
My tears freeze to my cheeks
And my numb fingers don't mean a thing
Because I love you so much,
It hurts here in my soul.
Because I love you so much,
It hurts me as a whole.

And the world keeps turning,
No matter how hard I try to make it stop burning up time like a flashfire
And I said once that if things don't work,
I can see us staying friends,
But I can see me hating you
Because I hate you
Because I love you

And my life keeps turning upside down
No matter how hard I try to make it.
Stop burning up time, your presence is a flashfire,
And I say as often as I can,
Without feeling foolish for saying it first,
That I love and I love and I love you.
But I know that I hate when you're not right beside me
And it hurts here
Because I hate you
Because I love you

Happy Valentines Day.
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Friday the 13th

Contributed by NovemberMayhem on Tuesday, 3rd August 2010 @ 11:51:48 AM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered



It's cold today.
At least it seems like it's 20 degrees under
100
Things run through my mind
Or maybe it's just you.
Walking home alone again
With Last Song blasting in my ears
I want to make them bleed
A legitimate reason to cry
Because I love you so much,
It hurts here in my soul.
Because I love you so much,
It hurts me as a whole.

And the world keeps turning
No matter how hard I try to make it
And I said once that if things don't work,
I can see us staying friends
But I can see me hating you
Because I hate you
Because I love you

The sky is an ocean of grey, rolling clouds
And they're laughing at my somberness
I put on a smile until I'm out of view
Then I put it in my pocket till I can see you once again
Now I notice the snowflakes that dance in the wind
My tears freeze to my cheeks
And my numb fingers don't mean a thing
Because I love you so much,
It hurts here in my soul.
Because I love you so much,
It hurts me as a whole.

And the world keeps turning,
No matter how hard I try to make it stop burning up time like a flashfire
And I said once that if things don't work,
I can see us staying friends,
But I can see me hating you
Because I hate you
Because I love you

And my life keeps turning upside down
No matter how hard I try to make it.
Stop burning up time, your presence is a flashfire,
And I say as often as I can,
Without feeling foolish for saying it first,
That I love and I love and I love you.
But I know that I hate when you're not right beside me
And it hurts here
Because I hate you
Because I love you

Happy Valentines Day.




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Re: Friday the 13th (User Rating: 1 )
by allforyou on Tuesday, 3rd August 2010 @ 12:06:21 PM AEST
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This is a great description of the crazy things that love can make you feel.

-Kara


Re: Friday the 13th (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 3rd August 2010 @ 04:40:07 PM AEST
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An incredible write with the ups and downs of any relationship.
Well done.

Blessings,
emy


Re: Friday the 13th (User Rating: 1 )
by thebadguy9999 on Tuesday, 3rd August 2010 @ 08:02:36 PM AEST
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nice




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