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Array ( [sid] => 161394 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Divine Creature [time] => 2010-07-26 01:46:27 [hometext] => Well I haven't written a poem in 5 years o_o here goes nothing.. [bodytext] => tangled vines, grow in her mind
twisted and snapped over time
creating visions, distorted once loved
her dearest moments all destroyed

her body lies stillborn
with melancholy struck upon her face
the precious roots of memory begin lifting
forced to lose every trace

she slowly drifts absent
as the world starts to darken
she wonders if she's said too much
not every emotion must be spoken

somehow she is awoken
from the familiar beating of his heart
and somehow her body is warmed
by the fervor in his eyes
and burning with each tear
she feels his life

the tangled vines all aflame
she's tenderly scolded by his soul
burning so brilliantly
she wonders how she could've let him go [comments] => 3 [counter] => 178 [topic] => 2 [informant] => xfaggotx [notes] => Corrected spelling as requested ~ Moderator_18 July 26, 2010 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Divine Creature

Contributed by xfaggotx on Monday, 26th July 2010 @ 01:46:27 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

tangled vines, grow in her mind
twisted and snapped over time
creating visions, distorted once loved
her dearest moments all destroyed

her body lies stillborn
with melancholy struck upon her face
the precious roots of memory begin lifting
forced to lose every trace

she slowly drifts absent
as the world starts to darken
she wonders if she's said too much
not every emotion must be spoken

somehow she is awoken
from the familiar beating of his heart
and somehow her body is warmed
by the fervor in his eyes
and burning with each tear
she feels his life

the tangled vines all aflame
she's tenderly scolded by his soul
burning so brilliantly
she wonders how she could've let him go

Copyright © xfaggotx ... [ 2010-07-26 01:46:27]
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Re: Divine Creature (User Rating: 1 )
by The_Unknown on Monday, 26th July 2010 @ 03:11:15 AM AEST
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For not writing a poem for five years, this is really good. :) I hope you keep writing.
-T_U

Re: Divine Creature (User Rating: 1 )
by cashfan1 on Monday, 26th July 2010 @ 08:10:09 AM AEST
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this is wonderful. well writen with words that flow off the page. thanks for sharing.

Re: Divine Creature (User Rating: 1 )
by fuzzler on Wednesday, 4th August 2010 @ 01:00:31 AM AEST
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Don't you dare wait another five years, a true talent.

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