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Array ( [sid] => 161384 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => What is it You Want? [time] => 2010-07-25 18:00:22 [hometext] => This poem is about my life experiences and what I have felt throughout the years of my life. Working everyday for my family and then something happens which makes everyone lose respect for me. [bodytext] => There is a voice in your head
It tells you to go to sleep
Unfortunately your mind is sinking
A few feet to deep
Thoughts are pressing you down
Like a thunder cloud,
Damp and thick, impossible to get through
What is it you want?
Revenge, revenge for what has happened
The past is in your way,
But it does not define you
The way they think it does
It does surround you
The way they think it does
You try to get away
But you fail each time
You try to be someone else
And then you die

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What is it You Want?

Contributed by GeorgeKoleris on Sunday, 25th July 2010 @ 06:00:22 PM in AEST
Topic: AmericanTragedy

There is a voice in your head
It tells you to go to sleep
Unfortunately your mind is sinking
A few feet to deep
Thoughts are pressing you down
Like a thunder cloud,
Damp and thick, impossible to get through
What is it you want?
Revenge, revenge for what has happened
The past is in your way,
But it does not define you
The way they think it does
It does surround you
The way they think it does
You try to get away
But you fail each time
You try to be someone else
And then you die

GeorgeKoleris, PLEASE: To help keep this site INTERACTIVE, please read and comment on at least 3 poems for each one you submit.

Number of poems per author per 24 hours are limited depending on membership level and interactivity.

Copyright © GeorgeKoleris ... [ 2010-07-25 18:00:22]
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Re: What is it You Want? (User Rating: 1 )
by boredtrucker on Sunday, 25th July 2010 @ 07:21:15 PM AEST
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pretty good difficult to under stand if u havnt been there but thats most peotry aint it?

Re: What is it You Want? (User Rating: 1 )
by chrisdavid on Monday, 26th July 2010 @ 12:59:10 AM AEST
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Pretty emotional stuff.

Re: What is it You Want? (User Rating: 1 )
by spud on Monday, 26th July 2010 @ 05:37:41 AM AEST
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Hi,

Nicely written. Hang in there, my friend. It's how
much or how little we enhance the lives of those
we love that defines us.

Tommy

Re: What is it You Want? (User Rating: 1 )
by northernlights on Monday, 26th July 2010 @ 07:04:36 AM AEST
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If there is one think i've learned that however difficult life becomes you cannot help but be yourself but you can reach out to people who will accept you for who you are even if its not always easy to find them, difficult but brave write x

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