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Array ( [sid] => 161382 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Pushed [time] => 2010-07-25 13:52:11 [hometext] => I've just been feeling a little down because of the way i have been treated at work lately... [bodytext] => Torn away broken apart from it all,
lost in a madness they want me to fall.
The edge gets closer with every view,
and now I just wonder how time flew
Walking along the edge of this cliff,
it’s a wonder how I haven’t fallen off it
Lost to these cycles of hatred and pain,
demons just shun me there’s no one to blame
Trying to make me quit on this path,
they’re waiting to see me jump through the gap
Then laughing they’ll mock me and say they were right,
This guy is worthless and can’t put up a fight.
Wanting so badly to have it all end,
my pride is the only thing stopping a dead end.
The issues keep showing me what is wrong,
but I cant find the answers for fixing this obsession.




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Pushed

Contributed by regetful on Sunday, 25th July 2010 @ 01:52:11 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



Torn away broken apart from it all,
lost in a madness they want me to fall.
The edge gets closer with every view,
and now I just wonder how time flew
Walking along the edge of this cliff,
it’s a wonder how I haven’t fallen off it
Lost to these cycles of hatred and pain,
demons just shun me there’s no one to blame
Trying to make me quit on this path,
they’re waiting to see me jump through the gap
Then laughing they’ll mock me and say they were right,
This guy is worthless and can’t put up a fight.
Wanting so badly to have it all end,
my pride is the only thing stopping a dead end.
The issues keep showing me what is wrong,
but I cant find the answers for fixing this obsession.




regetful, PLEASE: To help keep this site INTERACTIVE, please read and comment on at least 3 poems for each one you submit.

Number of poems per author per 24 hours are limited depending on membership level and interactivity.




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Re: Pushed (User Rating: 1 )
by LovingWhispers on Sunday, 25th July 2010 @ 03:43:55 PM AEST
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I feel for you as this is a horrible situation to be in.
Although,with this said,I have a feeling you are going to make it,mainly because I believe you are stronger and more determined than you or they realise.
Nicely expressed!!

Blessings
LW


Re: Pushed (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Monday, 26th July 2010 @ 08:54:01 AM AEST
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I suppose it's how you see work I suppose.So many people make it the centre of their life and yet it shouldn't be.It should be seen as the means to an end, the vehicle to allow you to do other things like go on holidays or buy the things in life that you want.
Still, I know how you feel, it's frustrating to constantly be told you are doing things wrong.

Steve




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