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Unaware of their own demise
Enraptured with the glory of their own beauty,
Captivated by their own reflection in a mirror-

In ignorance,
They walk hand in hand into an open flame,
Unaware until ultimately it’s too late,
Unchangeable is their eternal fate-

Burning alive, they burn, in death, but never dying,
Everlastingly filled with sorrows crying,
Crying aloud with many-many sorrow’s grief,
Unable to obtain any kind of relief-

Unheard, they scream louder and louder,
Only heard by their own ears,
Shaking and trembling,
Tormented with eternal fears-

Open the eyes of your understanding,
Adhere to the voice of reason,
Before the light goes out,
And upon us fall the eternal night season,

Let us receive the joy that has been given,
All our sin has been forgiven,
Taking the hand that is outstretched,

Being illuminated in the spirit of our mind,
With the word of His glory,
Being eternally in our heart etched-
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WITH SORROWS CRYING

Contributed by joe-joe on Sunday, 18th July 2010 @ 05:30:54 AM in AEST
Topic: spiritual

WITH SORROWS CRYING

Unaware of their own demise
Enraptured with the glory of their own beauty,
Captivated by their own reflection in a mirror-

In ignorance,
They walk hand in hand into an open flame,
Unaware until ultimately it’s too late,
Unchangeable is their eternal fate-

Burning alive, they burn, in death, but never dying,
Everlastingly filled with sorrows crying,
Crying aloud with many-many sorrow’s grief,
Unable to obtain any kind of relief-

Unheard, they scream louder and louder,
Only heard by their own ears,
Shaking and trembling,
Tormented with eternal fears-

Open the eyes of your understanding,
Adhere to the voice of reason,
Before the light goes out,
And upon us fall the eternal night season,

Let us receive the joy that has been given,
All our sin has been forgiven,
Taking the hand that is outstretched,

Being illuminated in the spirit of our mind,
With the word of His glory,
Being eternally in our heart etched-

Copyright Â© joe-joe ... [ 2010-07-18 05:30:54]
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Re: WITH SORROWS CRYING (User Rating: 1 )
by chrisdavid on Monday, 19th July 2010 @ 12:46:19 AM AEST
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Very deep poem but nicely written.

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