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Array ( [sid] => 161142 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Earth [time] => 2010-07-14 22:36:27 [hometext] => Alright guys, I just joined this site and I have never done that much poetry before, so here is my poem, hope you like it. Tell me what you think. [bodytext] => Earth

The world lies in endless mysteries.
The Earth, the giver and taker of life.

The sun sets slowly over the water’s horizon.
The wind sweeps over the water’s surface.

Colors of red and blue spread afar over the horizon, all to fade with time.
The stars shine brightly overhead, just out of reach.
Skies of bright blue lay out overhead.

Waves reach the beach’s surface.
The world is a fearful place.
Giant red sparks fly, as another volcano bursts.

More sparks fly, as another gun ignites, as another bomb
explodes. As another war comes and goes, history repeats, yet again.
From the dew that quenches the land, to the sand that parches the desert,
the Earth remains the same.

From the snow covered mountains, to the rocky plateaus, the
Earth remains our home. As another sun sets and another sun rises,
another day begins. The sea, the land, the mountains,
all parts of our home.

The colors of this world fade with time.
But for know, the world, and all its adventures wait.
So use the time you have and make it an experience to remember.

For the will to live and the desire to explore knows no bounds, nor rest.
It is one world we live in, may it never change, and may it never change us.
Our world, the giver and taker of life.





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Earth

Contributed by The_Writing_Master on Wednesday, 14th July 2010 @ 10:36:27 PM in AEST
Topic: spiritual



Earth

The world lies in endless mysteries.
The Earth, the giver and taker of life.

The sun sets slowly over the water’s horizon.
The wind sweeps over the water’s surface.

Colors of red and blue spread afar over the horizon, all to fade with time.
The stars shine brightly overhead, just out of reach.
Skies of bright blue lay out overhead.

Waves reach the beach’s surface.
The world is a fearful place.
Giant red sparks fly, as another volcano bursts.

More sparks fly, as another gun ignites, as another bomb
explodes. As another war comes and goes, history repeats, yet again.
From the dew that quenches the land, to the sand that parches the desert,
the Earth remains the same.

From the snow covered mountains, to the rocky plateaus, the
Earth remains our home. As another sun sets and another sun rises,
another day begins. The sea, the land, the mountains,
all parts of our home.

The colors of this world fade with time.
But for know, the world, and all its adventures wait.
So use the time you have and make it an experience to remember.

For the will to live and the desire to explore knows no bounds, nor rest.
It is one world we live in, may it never change, and may it never change us.
Our world, the giver and taker of life.





The_Writing_Master, PLEASE: To help keep this site INTERACTIVE, please read and comment on at least 3 poems for each one you submit.

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Re: Earth (User Rating: 1 )
by Sushila on Wednesday, 14th July 2010 @ 11:23:40 PM AEST
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Good work and welcome abroad!
Well written meaningful words.
Look forward to reading more of your poems


Re: Earth (User Rating: 1 )
by holderofthestone on Thursday, 15th July 2010 @ 12:26:41 AM AEST
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nice job with this one.

welcome to the site!


Re: Earth (User Rating: 1 )
by andrewjones12 on Thursday, 15th July 2010 @ 06:59:38 AM AEST
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i dig it! welcome, im a newer member also, and i do look foward to reading some more of your work. i have writtin similar, check them out and tell me what you think.
-andrew


Re: Earth (User Rating: 1 )
by kye on Thursday, 15th July 2010 @ 10:05:33 AM AEST
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I think your poem was very meaningful and had a majestic sense of imagery. I could see your descriptions and greatly admire your writing technique.

Well done.

Kye-


Re: Earth (User Rating: 1 )
by joe-joe on Friday, 16th July 2010 @ 12:45:48 PM AEST
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nice write...enjoyed the picture that your words painted...


Re: Earth (User Rating: 1 )
by antikythera on Sunday, 18th July 2010 @ 05:12:43 AM AEST
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Great poem. I wrote one similar called "Awe of Earth." You should check out mine and compare styles. I like yours a lot, very political.


Re: Earth (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 25th July 2010 @ 03:06:36 AM AEST
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The earth neither gives life nor takes it but that is Gods doing.




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