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My Lovely
Contributed by
Maple_Lion
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Tuesday, 13th July 2010 @ 04:40:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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"My Lovely"
On every crest atop every rise
willows bow and sway
To her effortless strides her approving eyes
as she seemingly glides away
The gleeful lark his call shrill and sharp
yields to her pleasing tones
Concealed in thickets hidden by trees
he mimics ever in true reprise
her melody all foreknown
Various amounts of alabaster and rose
applies to her countenance unmistakably
and a hopefulness no living being could oppose
an accepting heart awarded unconditionally
One of Heavens own has been misplaced
amongst us mortal drones
Unearthly conceived of goodness to embrace
arrived from the Almighty's throne
Of you dear friend there is no second
my association displayed always proudly
for my darkness has been forever brightened
from all that is you................."My Lovely
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Re: My Lovely
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by Wachumiri on
Wednesday, 25th August 2010 @ 07:23:23 PM AEST
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Very good, I loved it. Though, it would be easier to read, to know when to pause, if you added a few commas in there.
Take care,
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