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[sid] => 161086
[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => 80
[time] => 2010-07-11 22:49:20
[hometext] => My first try at song lyrics, a song about a very dark time in my life
[bodytext] => Waves crash And thunder roar Lovers dashed And my spirit will soar High vs. low Not even worth believing No one knows All of my pain and grieving Light disappears Like tears in the sea Confronting fears Ending whatever could be Endlessly together Eternally apart Hoping forever Deep within my heart Thinking about Not thinking at all Carrying out My final epic fall Cruising around Picking up speed Too much found To fill my empty need Once, twice Over and over I’ve failed Final advice But these thoughts cannot be derailed Endlessly together Forever apart Hoping forever Deep within my heart Finally free Leaving nothing behind Nothing but me Planning in my mind Crunching metals Suddenly coming to a halt Red dripping petals Self-destruction is my fault Endlessly together Forever apart Hoping, but never As glass pierces my heart Angel-1, PLEASE help keep this site INTERACTIVE by reading and commenting on at least 3 poems BY OTHER MEMBERS for each one you submit. Do not comment on your own work. Your comments on Snowflake rewrite and I Beg For Forgiveness have been removed. If you wish to thank or correspond with someone, please send a private message. Also, note, before posting rewrites, please have the original removed by posting a reply in the Edit / Delete forum. As of this posting, you have posted 11 poems without any interactive comments. Before posting another poem, please bring your comment to poem ratio to at least 1:1. Thank you. Number of poems per author per 24 hours are limited depending on membership level and interactivity. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 195 [topic] => 34 [informant] => Angel-1 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SongLyrics )
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