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Array ( [sid] => 161086 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => 80 [time] => 2010-07-11 22:49:20 [hometext] => My first try at song lyrics, a song about a very dark time in my life [bodytext] => Waves crash
And thunder roar
Lovers dashed
And my spirit will soar

High vs. low
Not even worth believing
No one knows
All of my pain and grieving

Light disappears
Like tears in the sea
Confronting fears
Ending whatever could be

Endlessly together
Eternally apart
Hoping forever
Deep within my heart

Thinking about
Not thinking at all
Carrying out
My final epic fall

Cruising around
Picking up speed
Too much found
To fill my empty need

Once, twice
Over and over I’ve failed
Final advice
But these thoughts cannot be derailed

Endlessly together
Forever apart
Hoping forever
Deep within my heart

Finally free
Leaving nothing behind
Nothing but me
Planning in my mind

Crunching metals
Suddenly coming to a halt
Red dripping petals
Self-destruction is my fault

Endlessly together
Forever apart
Hoping, but never
As glass pierces my heart




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80

Contributed by Angel-1 on Sunday, 11th July 2010 @ 10:49:20 PM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics



Waves crash
And thunder roar
Lovers dashed
And my spirit will soar

High vs. low
Not even worth believing
No one knows
All of my pain and grieving

Light disappears
Like tears in the sea
Confronting fears
Ending whatever could be

Endlessly together
Eternally apart
Hoping forever
Deep within my heart

Thinking about
Not thinking at all
Carrying out
My final epic fall

Cruising around
Picking up speed
Too much found
To fill my empty need

Once, twice
Over and over I’ve failed
Final advice
But these thoughts cannot be derailed

Endlessly together
Forever apart
Hoping forever
Deep within my heart

Finally free
Leaving nothing behind
Nothing but me
Planning in my mind

Crunching metals
Suddenly coming to a halt
Red dripping petals
Self-destruction is my fault

Endlessly together
Forever apart
Hoping, but never
As glass pierces my heart




Angel-1, PLEASE help keep this site INTERACTIVE by reading and commenting on at least 3 poems BY OTHER MEMBERS for each one you submit.

Do not comment on your own work. Your comments on Snowflake rewrite and I Beg For Forgiveness have been removed. If you wish to thank or correspond with someone, please send a private message.

Also, note, before posting rewrites, please have the original removed by posting a reply in the Edit / Delete forum.

As of this posting, you have posted 11 poems without any interactive comments. Before posting another poem, please bring your comment to poem ratio to at least 1:1. Thank you.

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Copyright © Angel-1 ... [ 2010-07-11 22:49:20]
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Re: 80 (User Rating: 1 )
by pooja on Thursday, 15th July 2010 @ 11:33:21 AM AEST
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A smashing start !
Your poem has beautiful ironies, paradoxes, that are refreshing.
My favourite 'Thinking about not thinking at all'
Great job ! Keep writing.


Re: 80 (User Rating: 1 )
by Banjosandwitch on Friday, 16th July 2010 @ 04:36:05 AM AEST
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banjo is always looking for song writers




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