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Array ( [sid] => 160925 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => We Make, We Care [time] => 2010-07-03 16:43:19 [hometext] => A simple look at love in life [bodytext] => The irony, the suns shines brightly
The whisper of the cool breeze
My clothes fitting tightly
A scented flower makes me sneeze

A swim in the lake
And a look in her eye
Naked alone nothing to take
Under the bright blue sky

When hands touch
The scent of her skin
I love her so much
With nothing to win

Alone again in the sands of time
With voices crying in the night
All I have is my rhyme
And now I must stave the fight

Someone new for me to love
To walk the earth and to know
To accept the gift from above
And take with me where I go.

23rd January 2009
9:39:31 am

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We Make, We Care

Contributed by Balmain_Tiger on Saturday, 3rd July 2010 @ 04:43:19 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

The irony, the suns shines brightly
The whisper of the cool breeze
My clothes fitting tightly
A scented flower makes me sneeze

A swim in the lake
And a look in her eye
Naked alone nothing to take
Under the bright blue sky

When hands touch
The scent of her skin
I love her so much
With nothing to win

Alone again in the sands of time
With voices crying in the night
All I have is my rhyme
And now I must stave the fight

Someone new for me to love
To walk the earth and to know
To accept the gift from above
And take with me where I go.

23rd January 2009
9:39:31 am

Balmain_Tiger, PLEASE: To help keep this site INTERACTIVE, please read and comment on at least 3 poems for each one you submit.

If you want to post 3 poems in one day, then leave 9 comments!

Number of poems per author per 24 hours are limited depending on membership level and interactivity.

Copyright © Balmain_Tiger ... [ 2010-07-03 16:43:19]
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Re: We Make, We Care (User Rating: 1 )
by lesoleilnoire on Saturday, 3rd July 2010 @ 07:07:49 PM AEST
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Nicely written. Your message is true about love here. Great imagery.

Heidi

Re: We Make, We Care (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 3rd July 2010 @ 07:30:10 PM AEST
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Another beautiful, touching, sweet wrte.
blessings,
emy

Re: We Make, We Care (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 3rd July 2010 @ 07:30:11 PM AEST
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Another beautiful, touching, sweet wrte.
blessings,
emy

Re: We Make, We Care (User Rating: 1 )
by omarzz on Wednesday, 7th July 2010 @ 05:47:03 AM AEST
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a pure write from the soul

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