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[sid] => 16066
[catid] => 1
[aid] => Mick
[title] => Soulless words
[time] => 2003-04-15 22:45:00
[hometext] => Sometimes it actually hurts.....
[bodytext] => Once again my soul has been torn, my mind so confused, But theres no time to morn,
I ask myself what did i do, thinking of nothing, it couldn't have been you,
All I wanted was to find a way, but you broke my heart on that fateful day,
You said those words that killed me inside, I guess it didn't matter how hard i tried,
You played your games with my heart, But when it's all done you tore me apart,
This place I feel once again, i've been here before, I knew it would end,
You leave me in question, just wondering why, what was so bad, that made you say goodbye,
Now your gone, and i'm all alone, but i'm used to this feeling, being on my own,
Silence now is the only sound, my breath the only motion around,
The seering sting from the words you told to me, it's just so hard for me to beilieve,
I'll get over it the same way i always do, by showing no emotion, and letting my anger eat
my memories of you,
What is your real reason? The hell if i should know, I have no reason to care, remember
i'm all on my own,
This pain that i now feel inside, eats my soul, i wish i would die,
It's not worth living like this, this dismal place i'm rotting in,
My words are sheer but the they are, because of this i feel so far,
Far from anyone or anything alike, far from myself, stuck in the night,
Blackened is my day since i lost you, but I let you tell me anyway, just to see it through,
I hope I don't make you cry, but one of us needs to, for cleansing my soul is something
I can't do,
Now that it's said, over, and through, I just wanted to stop and thank you,
For being so honest and being so sweet, also for making my heart not beat.
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[informant] => kims4ever
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Soulless words
Contributed by
kims4ever
on
Tuesday, 15th April 2003 @ 10:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Once again my soul has been torn, my mind so confused, But theres no time to morn,
I ask myself what did i do, thinking of nothing, it couldn't have been you,
All I wanted was to find a way, but you broke my heart on that fateful day,
You said those words that killed me inside, I guess it didn't matter how hard i tried,
You played your games with my heart, But when it's all done you tore me apart,
This place I feel once again, i've been here before, I knew it would end,
You leave me in question, just wondering why, what was so bad, that made you say goodbye,
Now your gone, and i'm all alone, but i'm used to this feeling, being on my own,
Silence now is the only sound, my breath the only motion around,
The seering sting from the words you told to me, it's just so hard for me to beilieve,
I'll get over it the same way i always do, by showing no emotion, and letting my anger eat
my memories of you,
What is your real reason? The hell if i should know, I have no reason to care, remember
i'm all on my own,
This pain that i now feel inside, eats my soul, i wish i would die,
It's not worth living like this, this dismal place i'm rotting in,
My words are sheer but the they are, because of this i feel so far,
Far from anyone or anything alike, far from myself, stuck in the night,
Blackened is my day since i lost you, but I let you tell me anyway, just to see it through,
I hope I don't make you cry, but one of us needs to, for cleansing my soul is something
I can't do,
Now that it's said, over, and through, I just wanted to stop and thank you,
For being so honest and being so sweet, also for making my heart not beat.
Copyright ©
kims4ever
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2003-04-15 22:45:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Soulless words
(User Rating: 1 ) by bobotheclown on
Tuesday, 15th April 2003 @ 11:49:56 PM AEST (User
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Wow... this poem is amazing. You create such tension and fear I felt as if I was there with you. I hope to read more from you.
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Re: Soulless words
(User Rating: 1 ) by PhantomsBBYgrl on
Saturday, 19th April 2003 @ 03:07:55 PM AEST (User
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This really hurts............... but its a good poem if you want to hurt someone that just wanted to be friends and didnt want to hurt you!
love always and forever,
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Re: Soulless words
(User Rating: 0 ) by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 30th April 2003 @ 05:28:31 PM AEST (User
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It was wired i did not like it! I thought it was retarted! |
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Re: Soulless words
(User Rating: 1 ) by Trisha on
Tuesday, 27th May 2003 @ 11:43:07 AM AEST (User
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This peom is long and good |
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