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Array ( [sid] => 160400 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Isn't It Midnight? [time] => 2010-06-06 19:33:09 [hometext] => [bodytext] => You say good morning
with day in your eyes
and a part of me slowly dies
isn’t it midnight?

Your kiss said good morning
with day in your touch
I’ve never ever hurt this much
isn’t it midnight?

Your window view says good morning
with day in you hug
and you stab me with every shoulder shrug
isn’t it midnight?

Your gentle smile said good morning
with day in your voice
broken mirrors reflecting my bad choice
isn’t it midnight?

Your tears said good bye to morning
and you waved away day
your lips don’t move but I hear everything you say
why do I love midnight?

because if you're still here at midnight I know you're here to stay
it marks the beginning and end of a day
and when things are silent dark and still it feels right
and that’s why i love midnight.

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Isn't It Midnight?

Contributed by NadineP on Sunday, 6th June 2010 @ 07:33:09 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

You say good morning
with day in your eyes
and a part of me slowly dies
isn’t it midnight?

Your kiss said good morning
with day in your touch
I’ve never ever hurt this much
isn’t it midnight?

Your window view says good morning
with day in you hug
and you stab me with every shoulder shrug
isn’t it midnight?

Your gentle smile said good morning
with day in your voice
broken mirrors reflecting my bad choice
isn’t it midnight?

Your tears said good bye to morning
and you waved away day
your lips don’t move but I hear everything you say
why do I love midnight?

because if you're still here at midnight I know you're here to stay
it marks the beginning and end of a day
and when things are silent dark and still it feels right
and that’s why i love midnight.

Copyright Â© NadineP ... [ 2010-06-06 19:33:09]
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Re: Isn't It Midnight? (User Rating: 1 )
by xXInkInMyVeinsXx on Monday, 7th June 2010 @ 09:23:36 AM AEST
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I really love this, especially the last stanza. Good job :)

(btw 3rd stanza I think it's supposed to be 'day in 'your' hug')

Re: Isn't It Midnight? (User Rating: 1 )
by joe-joe on Monday, 7th June 2010 @ 02:25:33 PM AEST
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a very unique insight into love,
very nice write...

Re: Isn't It Midnight? (User Rating: 1 )
by JakerBaker88 on Friday, 11th June 2010 @ 05:05:35 PM AEST
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I liked your use of imagery in this poem. However, you might want to consider working on the flow of your poetry etc. If polished this could be a really strong piece. Take care and keep on writing! ;)

Re: Isn't It Midnight? (User Rating: 1 )
by Cindy359 on Saturday, 11th September 2010 @ 05:36:56 AM AEST
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This is a good poem...but I have to be very truthful.. I still like the poem mistress
take care
Cindy

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