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Array ( [sid] => 159953 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => City in Flames [time] => 2010-05-18 21:01:57 [hometext] => Even though we might live in a terrible place we could be the light which blocks out the darkness [bodytext] => I lookout into the city and what do I see
Pain,suffering, and misery
The situation continues to get worse
People living to die so what is it all worth
Mother's struggling to feed their children
Praying for the day their struggle will end
But until then
They must continue to contend
With this cruel reality called life
Where the righteous are struck down for doing what's right
Tears flow from my eyes as I watch the children weep
Not knowing if they'll live to see next week
Our city is in flames
A place where nothing seems to change
The only way out is through fortune or fame
So I ask what do you gain
From living in a place where death lurks every corner
Where making it to 16 not for sure
I try to look away but I can't stop looking
At the place I call home which sees me as nothing
Another statistic a burden to society
Money is a great necessity
But above all knowledge is key
So as for me
I want to inspire change
Rescue the fallen from the city in flames [comments] => 2 [counter] => 152 [topic] => 19 [informant] => darkknight [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => InspirationalPoems )
City in Flames

Contributed by darkknight on Tuesday, 18th May 2010 @ 09:01:57 PM in AEST
Topic: InspirationalPoems



I lookout into the city and what do I see
Pain,suffering, and misery
The situation continues to get worse
People living to die so what is it all worth
Mother's struggling to feed their children
Praying for the day their struggle will end
But until then
They must continue to contend
With this cruel reality called life
Where the righteous are struck down for doing what's right
Tears flow from my eyes as I watch the children weep
Not knowing if they'll live to see next week
Our city is in flames
A place where nothing seems to change
The only way out is through fortune or fame
So I ask what do you gain
From living in a place where death lurks every corner
Where making it to 16 not for sure
I try to look away but I can't stop looking
At the place I call home which sees me as nothing
Another statistic a burden to society
Money is a great necessity
But above all knowledge is key
So as for me
I want to inspire change
Rescue the fallen from the city in flames




Copyright © darkknight ... [ 2010-05-18 21:01:57]
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Re: City in Flames (User Rating: 1 )
by Nevilleconnie on Wednesday, 19th May 2010 @ 08:05:18 AM AEST
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Such a powerful and strong message. This is a poem everyone should read and be inspired by. A fantastic poem, But more than that, a fantastic idea.


Re: City in Flames (User Rating: 1 )
by joe-joe on Wednesday, 19th May 2010 @ 11:56:26 AM AEST
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very inspiring write...only as one first rescues oneself, can he reach back and inspire others to follow...




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