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Leer
Contributed by
fatalpath
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Saturday, 15th May 2010 @ 07:31:36 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Youve seen me tear,
Ive confessed you my fears
You tell that with the years
His voice I will not hear
You throw at me a joke to get a steer,
But you fail, and get no cheer
My mind I cannot clear
Because memories still appear
Like him whispering in my ear,
I would never leave you my dear
He left me alone, hurting oh so severe,
But like you said, With the years,
The pain will finally disappear.
All those tears are now left behind at the mere,
And never looking back and letting my heart get sheered
Happiness, Oh happiness please make your presence oh so near
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2010-05-15 07:31:36]
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Re: Leer
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by fish on
Saturday, 15th May 2010 @ 01:59:19 PM AEST
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i thought i was doing you a favor by reading your piece but after reading it i found that i would regret not reading it if someone recited the poem to me.
the all A rhyme scheme is not a tool for amateurs.
your poem is lovely |
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