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Array ( [sid] => 159728 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Untitled [time] => 2010-05-10 12:42:52 [hometext] => This a poem about self harm and suicide. I wrote this several months ago and this has always been a favourite of mine. [bodytext] => A blood stained razorblade laid on the young girl's bathroom floor.
A blood stained white towel laid beside the razorblade.
Dark red dried drops of blood covered the black and white floor tiles.
An empty bottle of vodka accompanied by several empty boxes of pills laid on the bed.
A photo album filled with photos of thin and beautiful models,
who she wished she could look like laid on bedroom floor.
A diary of how she suffered years of abuse and depression laid under her bed.
A young girl lies in a coffin with numerous cuts on her wrists and arms.
Hundreds of people gather round to say goodbye
all asking the same question How could she leave us like this?




xxluisa89xx , PLEASE: To help keep this site INTERACTIVE, please read and comment on at least 3 poems for each one you submit. This does not include or pertain to commenting on your own poetry. Those comments have been removed. Thank you. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 228 [topic] => 36 [informant] => xxluisa89xx [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )
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Contributed by xxluisa89xx on Monday, 10th May 2010 @ 12:42:52 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



A blood stained razorblade laid on the young girl's bathroom floor.
A blood stained white towel laid beside the razorblade.
Dark red dried drops of blood covered the black and white floor tiles.
An empty bottle of vodka accompanied by several empty boxes of pills laid on the bed.
A photo album filled with photos of thin and beautiful models,
who she wished she could look like laid on bedroom floor.
A diary of how she suffered years of abuse and depression laid under her bed.
A young girl lies in a coffin with numerous cuts on her wrists and arms.
Hundreds of people gather round to say goodbye
all asking the same question How could she leave us like this?




xxluisa89xx , PLEASE: To help keep this site INTERACTIVE, please read and comment on at least 3 poems for each one you submit. This does not include or pertain to commenting on your own poetry. Those comments have been removed. Thank you.



Copyright © xxluisa89xx ... [ 2010-05-10 12:42:52]
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Re: Untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by chrisdavid on Tuesday, 11th May 2010 @ 12:04:02 PM AEST
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Very sad. Is this a true story?


Re: Untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by guiltycircles on Wednesday, 12th May 2010 @ 06:29:41 PM AEST
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beautifully painful... the words paint a vivid picture...




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