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[bodytext] => Never evident
Yet, they linger the longest
Causing great distress.
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Mental Scars
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windowguy
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Monday, 3rd May 2010 @ 11:18:27 AM in AEST
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Never evident
Yet, they linger the longest
Causing great distress.
Copyright ©
windowguy
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2010-05-03 11:18:27]
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Re: Mental Scars
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by DarkWolf on
Monday, 3rd May 2010 @ 11:26:05 AM AEST
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| strait to the point and not much to it wow just wow |
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Re: Mental Scars
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 3rd May 2010 @ 11:35:36 AM AEST
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yes, they are wrapped up in little perfect packages like this excellent haiku,
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Mental Scars
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by northernlights on
Monday, 3rd May 2010 @ 11:40:50 AM AEST
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| Perfect description |
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Re: Mental Scars
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by Ambivalence on
Monday, 3rd May 2010 @ 03:06:58 PM AEST
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very true, physical suffering is nothing compared to emotional pain.
great haiku....
take care
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Re: Mental Scars
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by lesoleilnoire on
Monday, 3rd May 2010 @ 07:31:00 PM AEST
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You capture the true essence of emotional pain. Excellent haiku!
Heidi |
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Re: Mental Scars
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by Breezy on
Monday, 3rd May 2010 @ 07:41:13 PM AEST
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wow. This was excellent. You know, I've often found it
confusing, that we are given time to get over physical
wounds...made to even. Yet, when inflicted with a mental
wound, we are told to "just get over it". Perhaps that is
part of the reason they take so long to heal. They are just
ignored. *sigh* When a haiku can have me profoundly
pondering, then you've done an exceptional job.
Excellent post!! -- Achelois
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