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Array ( [sid] => 159476 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Let me Be [time] => 2010-05-02 20:57:12 [hometext] => [bodytext] => You’re sitting there
Staring at me
Won’t you please?
Just let me be!

I told you I loved you
I poured out my heart
But you didn’t care
So I took a reluctant part

I am over you
I keep telling me
But only if
You would let me be!

I took a chance
And it got me here
I lost my heart
So I will shed a tear

I don’t mind
If you see me cry
Because it’s all my fault
That you caught my eye

I have a weakness
For people like you
But I know that
I need someone new

Because I told you I loved you
I poured out my heart
But you didn’t care
So I put my tears in my art.
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Let me Be

Contributed by Jessi95 on Sunday, 2nd May 2010 @ 08:57:12 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

You’re sitting there
Staring at me
Won’t you please?
Just let me be!

I told you I loved you
I poured out my heart
But you didn’t care
So I took a reluctant part

I am over you
I keep telling me
But only if
You would let me be!

I took a chance
And it got me here
I lost my heart
So I will shed a tear

I don’t mind
If you see me cry
Because it’s all my fault
That you caught my eye

I have a weakness
For people like you
But I know that
I need someone new

Because I told you I loved you
I poured out my heart
But you didn’t care
So I put my tears in my art.

Copyright Â© Jessi95 ... [ 2010-05-02 20:57:12]
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Re: Let me Be (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 2nd May 2010 @ 10:27:41 PM AEST
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Sad subject but really good writing.
blessings,
emy

Re: Let me Be (User Rating: 1 )
by Nevilleconnie on Monday, 3rd May 2010 @ 05:22:04 AM AEST
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Beautiful poem with a lot of emotions. I liked the part about you putting your tears into your art. That's exactly what you did, and you did an excellent job with it.

Re: Let me Be (User Rating: 1 )
by Ambivalence on Monday, 3rd May 2010 @ 03:46:12 PM AEST
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so heavily poignant. maybe your experience can teach us a lesson or two concerning relationships. i admire the way you ended this write becuz you can always let yourself be when it comes to poetry!

take care

-K.Z.

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