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[aid] => mick
[title] => (I need help with a title) This is my first poem.
[time] => 2010-04-26 13:30:09
[hometext] => My dad and I had an argument last night, and I wrote my first poem through my feelings. Its not very good. I still need a title, and im still editing it.
[bodytext] => Tears drip down my face Black tear drops stain my cheeks Is there a way to escape this fate? ive been waiting here for weeks, and weeks I feel dead inside All I ever wanted, was to have a life. A life where you are away, away from me Im sick of you I want you to go away, forever and ever i hope you die someday I know this is hard But I have to say this I have changed a lot I hope you can understand this I am your daughter Well, Technically not, but still You need to give me myspace Im not a little girl anymore I love you but im sick of you i hate you, I honestly do. But you are my so called "dad" I don't know what the hell id do without you. You say you trust me but it doesnt seem like it. If you only knew all of the things ive done, youd probably say ***** it. Im a slut, im a whore, Im sorry dad, But you don't know me anymore Im sick and tierd all of the fighting, arguning It *****es me off Just leave me alone, before i say ***** off All you do is worry you need to stop you need to trust me before i leave off Most days I feel like dying other i dont but someday youll see me dead. By my bed coverd in blood, hanging from the ceiling, or even shot in the head I hope I dont regret this, Im sure I wont Im sorry to say this, But id be happier dead. I cant wait untill your gone. Or when im old enough. I cant wait to be on my own, away from you. I wish God would take one of us soon. (If you have any suggestions on making my writing better please share them with me) [comments] => 4 [counter] => 190 [topic] => 36 [informant] => xxdropdeadxrawr [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )
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