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You disappear
Georgie comes to hold my hand
To protect me from his brothers

Sad how a figment of sickness
Can replace you
“Where have you been?”
Come the words at dawn

To know intimately in the night
Loneliness like a twin – Georgie
And the fear his brothers bring
White thundering terror in the night
Not safe in my own bed

I cry for your abandon
All of you, my blood and soul related
Upon whom I once depended
Before I made Georgie

Because all of you fell asleep
When Jesus, I told you not to
It is best anyway for you to endure
With eyes wide closed
You wouldn't want to see

My childhood imaginary friend
Carry him into adulthood
Because he is my only true friend
The only one who never sleeps [comments] => 5 [counter] => 199 [topic] => 48 [informant] => Chamaron [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Georgie

Contributed by Chamaron on Wednesday, 21st April 2010 @ 08:43:31 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Lights go down
You disappear
Georgie comes to hold my hand
To protect me from his brothers

Sad how a figment of sickness
Can replace you
“Where have you been?”
Come the words at dawn

To know intimately in the night
Loneliness like a twin – Georgie
And the fear his brothers bring
White thundering terror in the night
Not safe in my own bed

I cry for your abandon
All of you, my blood and soul related
Upon whom I once depended
Before I made Georgie

Because all of you fell asleep
When Jesus, I told you not to
It is best anyway for you to endure
With eyes wide closed
You wouldn't want to see

My childhood imaginary friend
Carry him into adulthood
Because he is my only true friend
The only one who never sleeps

Copyright Â© Chamaron ... [ 2010-04-21 20:43:31]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Georgie (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 21st April 2010 @ 10:13:35 PM AEST
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I hear you loud and clear.
The only perfection is in our imagination.
I give you 100 points for such a good work of art.
huggs, blessings,
emy

Re: Georgie (User Rating: 1 )
by aliopterix on Thursday, 22nd April 2010 @ 01:58:36 AM AEST
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This is just such a beautiful piece of writing my friend. Incredibly worded and evocative. Thank you, Aliopterix

Re: Georgie (User Rating: 1 )
by Breezy on Thursday, 22nd April 2010 @ 06:23:27 AM AEST
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Fear can be a gripping emotion, almost like a vice.
Not just holding us, but squeezing our souls to the
point of suffocation. This was very thought provoking.
You write with eloquence.

Well done. -- Achelois

Re: Georgie (User Rating: 1 )
by alicewhite on Saturday, 12th October 2019 @ 11:31:30 PM AEST
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It ward gran bow
Eyes wide shut
I am the dancing clown
Don/'/t you wanna see where the rainbow ends
Do they float

OH YES
THEY ALL
FLLLOAT DOWN HERE
TOP HATS AN ALL
FLOAT NEVER FALL
CAN YOU WITH EYES WIDE SHUT RECALL
YOUR IMAGINARY FRIEND
CHILDHOODS END

Re: Georgie (User Rating: 1 )
by alicewhite on Saturday, 12th October 2019 @ 11:32:50 PM AEST
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It wards
Fran bow
Rainbow

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