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[aid] => mick
[title] => Mother Nature...
[time] => 2010-04-20 09:45:38
[hometext] => I wrote this poem in junior english and kind of started to like it, so took the plunge and posted it lol. :) Tell me what you think good helpful feed back please!
[bodytext] => Mother Nature The spring grass it sways gently from right to left The angry river’s clean smell floods the crisp spring air This is just another spring day So peaceful yet so define The controller, Mother Nature works the magic He, she, whatever it may be Controls the earth, the climate, the weather Where does she lie in the dark of the night? I want to know how, I want to know why? Mother Nature. . . .my friend Bring me rain Bring me snow Bring me gusty winds that make the autumn leaves blow Excitingly awaiting your next move Still waiting to feel that mysterious touch of you The sculpted mountains you show your warm sunlight upon Melts the rigged winter snow away And so I wonder once again who you are and where you stay? These are questions I’d like answered someday. . . Then I realize You are the pieces to everything You are the center of the universe You are the ancient wispy willow trees that lie in the fields below The dirt that dangles from the playful 6 year olds knees The dew that drip from the glorious daffodils on the walk out to get the newspaper each morning To experience your magic Is such an honor And so I thank you As everyone should For bringing things to life Just as God would [comments] => 3 [counter] => 150 [topic] => 30 [informant] => tjmontanagirl [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => PoemsonBeauty )
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