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Mirrors
Contributed by
SlipyNarcis2112
on
Wednesday, 14th April 2010 @ 01:29:57 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Look into my eyes
What do you see
A lover, a friend
An enemy
Are we friends
For what we share?
In life
In love
For our affair
In this I say
We must compare
Do not you see
One entity
In all we share
I am me
And you are to
We are me
Still you are you
I see me
And you to
I can see
That we are me
Both me and you
For not it is just
Our human hearts
In assembly
Of different parts?
Look into my eyes
What do you see
I see you
As well as me
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2010-04-14 01:29:57]
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Re: Mirrors
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Friday, 16th April 2010 @ 05:55:31 AM AEST
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A very reflective poem. (sorry couldn't help myself) But seriously, scintillating.
I love the way the lines mirror each other,
the choice of words and structure is perfect.
Once again i'd like to read more of yours so keep writing,
and if you could offer me advice on any of my poems i'd be quite pleased.
Keep it up.
Mickey. |
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