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Hesitating
Begrudging
Let me move
Let me surface
I glance up and the elements acquiesce
I witness a coherent monsoon herd
run across this brilliance
Hostile
The gravity of the situation empowers its meaning
Purpose
Progression
It has never seemed so vicious
so untamed
It hungers for truth
deceived by its cage tender
Yes, promises kept tamed the savage rebellion
Of the beating drencher
It has form
Poise
Precision
Justification
over there
I tremble in awe
Its inspiration knocks me to the floor
I used to fix my eyes on the same celestial sphere
The pressure beat down
But this change is undistinguishable
You know me
This continuance
This emotion
Resolved [comments] => 4 [counter] => 168 [topic] => 48 [informant] => SunshineBananas17 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 17 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Resolved

Contributed by SunshineBananas17 on Monday, 5th April 2010 @ 10:47:38 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

My stance is motionless
Hesitating
Begrudging
Let me move
Let me surface
I glance up and the elements acquiesce
I witness a coherent monsoon herd
run across this brilliance
Hostile
The gravity of the situation empowers its meaning
Purpose
Progression
It has never seemed so vicious
so untamed
It hungers for truth
deceived by its cage tender
Yes, promises kept tamed the savage rebellion
Of the beating drencher
It has form
Poise
Precision
Justification
over there
I tremble in awe
Its inspiration knocks me to the floor
I used to fix my eyes on the same celestial sphere
The pressure beat down
But this change is undistinguishable
You know me
This continuance
This emotion
Resolved

Copyright Â© SunshineBananas17 ... [ 2010-04-05 22:47:38]
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Re: Resolved (User Rating: 1 )
by chrisdavid on Monday, 5th April 2010 @ 11:53:20 PM AEST
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Nice debut poem. Well written. Welcome to the site. I hope you enjoy posting many entries on here, I for one think that it's the best place to submit poetry.
Take care, Chris.

Re: Resolved (User Rating: 1 )
by northernlights on Tuesday, 6th April 2010 @ 12:07:21 AM AEST
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Great way of expressing the element of resolve through the elements of Nature,can feel the strength of change running through this and an empowement, strong expressive write

Re: Resolved (User Rating: 1 )
by laststarontheleft on Tuesday, 6th April 2010 @ 09:28:02 AM AEST
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Hello and Welcome!
Your choice of words to portray such an emotion are superb......
They 'explain' it perfectly! Well written Sunshine :)
Star x x x

Re: Resolved (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 11th April 2010 @ 07:25:55 AM AEST
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Wow. What a powerful write! Your words command emotion and drive the reader to near distraction. The sheer force of this write is enough to move mountains! Well done and welcome to YPDC. Your unique and intriguing style is a perfect fit. :)

Seléne ~

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