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Array ( [sid] => 15856 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Used [time] => 2003-04-12 21:05:00 [hometext] => This poem was written at the moment! What i felt i wrote! I hope you like it! [bodytext] => Your friends in school,
They act real cool,
Their nice to you,
They talk to you.

You make arrangements out of school,
But they never actually call,
You hope and wait,
But stay on your own,
Siting by the telephone.

They don't include you,
You get left out,
Your on your own,
Without a doubt.

Unless you make the call yourself,
You never will go out,
So you see they obviously
They don't like u enough to call for themself.

You heart it sinks coz u feel alone,
Not liked by friends enough to call,
You laugh at school and one on one,
But why don't they call when their out having fun.

What about me why can't i join in,
If you like me in school, then why not ring,
If it's me who rings we go out an laugh,
But you never ring me, i dont understand why!

Why? Why? Why don't you ring? Why?

By Me, Liane Alton 14 [comments] => 2 [counter] => 259 [topic] => 16 [informant] => SopLea [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => FriendshipPoetry )

Used

Contributed by SopLea on Saturday, 12th April 2003 @ 09:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: FriendshipPoetry

Your friends in school,
They act real cool,
Their nice to you,
They talk to you.

You make arrangements out of school,
But they never actually call,
You hope and wait,
But stay on your own,
Siting by the telephone.

They don't include you,
You get left out,
Your on your own,
Without a doubt.

Unless you make the call yourself,
You never will go out,
So you see they obviously
They don't like u enough to call for themself.

You heart it sinks coz u feel alone,
Not liked by friends enough to call,
You laugh at school and one on one,
But why don't they call when their out having fun.

What about me why can't i join in,
If you like me in school, then why not ring,
If it's me who rings we go out an laugh,
But you never ring me, i dont understand why!

Why? Why? Why don't you ring? Why?

By Me, Liane Alton 14

Copyright © SopLea ... [ 2003-04-12 21:05:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Used (User Rating: 1 )
by 0o_Jelly_Bean_o0 on Saturday, 12th April 2003 @ 10:11:00 PM AEST
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I fully understand your poem, I recently started home schooling because I hated the school I was at and my friends from that school say they'll call but never do. So hey I understand... Hope yours do eventually. And I hope you keep writing.

Re: Used (User Rating: 1 )
by Trisha on Tuesday, 11th November 2003 @ 02:36:35 PM AEST
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I can say they will call some day but just don't think about it cause when you don't they'll call

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