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Array ( [sid] => 158283 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Sanctuary [time] => 2010-03-19 05:55:51 [hometext] => I wrote this poem to show how entrapment can have good aspects for certain people. The voice here is of someone who doesn’t like to go outside and enjoys feeling like their house is trapping them as a form of protection. [bodytext] => I rise to tend the house another day
Not leaving my sanctum to face outside
Remaining in my room keeps me content
Without the torture of social affairs

Tiresome small talk at parties that drag on
Strangers that will glare, then whisper and judge
So I choose to see humans on the box
To mute them when I please or turn them off

No soul can cause me harm as I’m closed in
Embracing walls that cherish and protect
Outside space is not my chance of freedom
Keep me in my shrine so that I can tend

Lock all the doors and keep me hostage here!
Block out the din and paint the windows black!
I care not if I have no human touch
How I adore the house that captures me!
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 157 [topic] => 21 [informant] => Amelia [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 7 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )
Sanctuary

Contributed by Amelia on Friday, 19th March 2010 @ 05:55:51 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems



I rise to tend the house another day
Not leaving my sanctum to face outside
Remaining in my room keeps me content
Without the torture of social affairs

Tiresome small talk at parties that drag on
Strangers that will glare, then whisper and judge
So I choose to see humans on the box
To mute them when I please or turn them off

No soul can cause me harm as I’m closed in
Embracing walls that cherish and protect
Outside space is not my chance of freedom
Keep me in my shrine so that I can tend

Lock all the doors and keep me hostage here!
Block out the din and paint the windows black!
I care not if I have no human touch
How I adore the house that captures me!




Copyright © Amelia ... [ 2010-03-19 05:55:51]
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Re: Sanctuary (User Rating: 1 )
by DarkWolf on Friday, 19th March 2010 @ 11:33:29 AM AEST
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This poem really speaks to me, and it says exactly how i feel at times. Were i'm all alone and yet i'm very comfortable with it. Were no one is around and I don't care.


Re: Sanctuary (User Rating: 1 )
by DrcGaimer on Friday, 19th March 2010 @ 02:48:44 PM AEST
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I loved the contrast in this poem. How the character enjoyed the security of being inside, yet states that the house has captured him or her. Most of all I love the message of the poem, how we become comfortable with the prisons we make for ourselves. Great job!




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