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[aid] => mick
[title] => Dance Club
[time] => 2010-03-09 17:16:58
[hometext] => Well this is my problem-child poem but i got some much appreciated help and i am somewhat happy with it now, please post suggestions if you can think of anything. It is, as of now, still a work in progress.
[bodytext] => It’s all wild spinning Sex on the Beach and Long Islands flowing Here the youth of the world gather To celebrate themselves they come Dancing Living Loving But none of them seem to be learning So here I am spinning with the rest Loving like the best Beauty at my right Fun to my left All that I was gone all that I am here. We worship the beat One mass One people Lights flashing Colors dancing Spinning closer Hands roving Hips twisting It’s all about the grind. Sweat running down my back But I can’t feel it. She’s a mocha goddess Her body so smooth And dress so tight All curves and black black hair She smiles as she spins Tempting Five days a week she makes change But every Friday night She blossoms like a rose I didn’t know her name I’ll never know her name Though the memory’ll stick [comments] => 1 [counter] => 229 [topic] => 43 [informant] => Inchiostro [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
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