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AMBIGUOUS
Contributed by
takeahittariq
on
Sunday, 28th February 2010 @ 03:11:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Im starting to lose focus
My minds playing tricks on me like hocus pocus
Starting to lose my feelings
I cant concentrate. No time to contemplate.
Nothings obvious and vivid
My souls shy. And timid
No shepherd to guide
Like a rollercoaster my life is a ride
What used to be light has now disappeared
The dark sides reappeared
My heads spinning and spinning
Everythings let lose
And plus I cant take the abuse
Take a dose of my life
Put yourself in my place
Im out of breath. Out of my depth
Almost close to death
Its happening over and over again
The pressures too much to pretend
Im broken.
And there is nothing left to mend
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2010-02-28 15:11:37]
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Re: AMBIGUOUS
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by mysellf on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2010 @ 01:05:53 PM AEST
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