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Array ( [sid] => 15752 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Losing You [time] => 2003-04-11 07:05:00 [hometext] => This pretty much tells about whats happening in my relationship pretty sad... [bodytext] => I didn't know what to do
When I was told not to see you
I didn't know how to feel
It was so unreal
Everything we had
Taken away just like that

From the times we shared
To the tears we've shed
And the memories that won't be forgotten

Then you tell me
What i don't want to hear
It hurt to here your words
Words I thought you would never say
But if you think its best
I will let you go

But Losing you will hurt the most
Putting our love on hold
No matter what the cost
Things just wont be the same
You tell me not to cry
It will be hard but I'll try

Can you see it in my eyes
Part of me is gone
I hoped our love was strong
But maybe i was wrong
It has weakened this short time apart
Now I know I'm losing you... [comments] => 2 [counter] => 162 [topic] => 2 [informant] => stonedraider23 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Losing You

Contributed by stonedraider23 on Friday, 11th April 2003 @ 07:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

I didn't know what to do
When I was told not to see you
I didn't know how to feel
It was so unreal
Everything we had
Taken away just like that

From the times we shared
To the tears we've shed
And the memories that won't be forgotten

Then you tell me
What i don't want to hear
It hurt to here your words
Words I thought you would never say
But if you think its best
I will let you go

But Losing you will hurt the most
Putting our love on hold
No matter what the cost
Things just wont be the same
You tell me not to cry
It will be hard but I'll try

Can you see it in my eyes
Part of me is gone
I hoped our love was strong
But maybe i was wrong
It has weakened this short time apart
Now I know I'm losing you...

Copyright © stonedraider23 ... [ 2003-04-11 07:05:00]
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Re: Losing You (User Rating: 1 )
by thegurl on Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 03:52:22 PM AEST
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this is sad.....yet touching....so many people feel that they cannot survive with the pain of a breakup...like a part of them dies....great write.

Re: Losing You (User Rating: 1 )
by savedbydeath on Tuesday, 22nd February 2005 @ 08:18:50 AM AEST
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meh,truly sad,but thats y god put me here,so close but yet so far,we all got scars and time CAN heal,so my process begins,it began a long time ago

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