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In no man's land of grass
A place of deepest sanctuary
Where the clock's hands never pass

It kind of feels like falling
Only I am laying still
Could it be my destiny
Or deliverance of free will

Sensations of harmonium
To which it knows no bounds
A requiem of voices
Yet my ears hear not a sound

A peaceful place to meditate
Awash with purest light
My sense of self relinquished
To the magic door of night

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Levitation

Contributed by laststarontheleft on Friday, 15th January 2010 @ 04:42:35 PM in AEST
Topic: fantasy

I hover just outside of time
In no man's land of grass
A place of deepest sanctuary
Where the clock's hands never pass

It kind of feels like falling
Only I am laying still
Could it be my destiny
Or deliverance of free will

Sensations of harmonium
To which it knows no bounds
A requiem of voices
Yet my ears hear not a sound

A peaceful place to meditate
Awash with purest light
My sense of self relinquished
To the magic door of night

Copyright © laststarontheleft ... [ 2010-01-15 16:42:35]
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Re: Levitation (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 15th January 2010 @ 04:59:37 PM AEST
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You're stoned. wink

wink

Na, I'm just messin' with ya'. But it sort of does have that sixties feel to it...that incense and peppermints vibe. Guess that's what I like about it.

Nice job. It's peaceful here.

I also like that it made me feel nostalgic in a sense that it reminded me of a time when we tried to levitate this girl when I was back in high school. It actually worked for a bit. I think.

Take care.

Tim
cool dude

cool dude

Re: Levitation (User Rating: 1 )
by Bleedthelove on Friday, 15th January 2010 @ 06:17:31 PM AEST
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Pretty...and very tranquile. Nicely written my friend.

- Bleedthelove.

Re: Levitation (User Rating: 1 )
by northernlights on Friday, 15th January 2010 @ 11:04:36 PM AEST
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really created the feel of levitation with this and the peacefulness sends you into another world well written lisa xx

Re: Levitation (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 16th January 2010 @ 03:47:12 AM AEST
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Out of body experience's are inducive
to step back out of the world and just watch it be
escaping the chaos the burden of man
even if only for a moment is exhilarating
rarely is it's grace depicted so finely

-D.Truth

Re: Levitation (User Rating: 1 )
by Daylynn_Van_Wyk on Saturday, 16th January 2010 @ 06:52:11 AM AEST
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I digg:)

Re: Levitation (User Rating: 1 )
by spud on Monday, 18th January 2010 @ 07:32:52 AM AEST
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Hi,

I agree with Tim - it has a touch of 60's about it - 'psychedelic' and 'peace brother.'
Am I on the right wavelength with that??

A peaceful, carefree, and uplifting write!

Tommy

Re: Levitation (User Rating: 1 )
by Prophet on Sunday, 28th March 2010 @ 09:16:07 PM AEST
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Dang... what I would do to feel like that. It sounds so good right now

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