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Array ( [sid] => 156716 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Relearn You [time] => 2010-01-15 10:47:05 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Fought my way to victory
It was a long struggle to bear
But at the time, there was no doubt
We both knew I cared.
All that time I worked so hard
To bring those damn walls down
Only to mutilate it; what a waste
Empty-handed; nothing I've found
Clawed my way close enough
To perhaps reach for your heart
But it slipped through my fingers
Like paint on a work of art
I watch you distance yourself
And I know you need your space
I realize what I must do.
. . . . . .
I must rebuild this fallen place
I must reattach the angel's wings
And redo all I have undone
I must push away the rain clouds
And pray for the coming sun
I must wait for your forgiveness
Though that isn't the hardest part
I must lean to forgive myself
Though I don't know where to start
The 'us' is lost somehow
And we must find it, my friend
I know what I must do now
I must relearn you all over again. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 186 [topic] => 22 [informant] => MoonlightKiss [notes] => Fixed some minor typos :-) Moderator_18 Jan 15, 2010 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Relearn You

Contributed by MoonlightKiss on Friday, 15th January 2010 @ 10:47:05 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Fought my way to victory
It was a long struggle to bear
But at the time, there was no doubt
We both knew I cared.
All that time I worked so hard
To bring those damn walls down
Only to mutilate it; what a waste
Empty-handed; nothing I've found
Clawed my way close enough
To perhaps reach for your heart
But it slipped through my fingers
Like paint on a work of art
I watch you distance yourself
And I know you need your space
I realize what I must do.
. . . . . .
I must rebuild this fallen place
I must reattach the angel's wings
And redo all I have undone
I must push away the rain clouds
And pray for the coming sun
I must wait for your forgiveness
Though that isn't the hardest part
I must lean to forgive myself
Though I don't know where to start
The 'us' is lost somehow
And we must find it, my friend
I know what I must do now
I must relearn you all over again.

Copyright © MoonlightKiss ... [ 2010-01-15 10:47:05]
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Re: Relearn You (User Rating: 1 )
by LadyXclusive on Friday, 15th January 2010 @ 10:08:57 PM AEST
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A great write; from begin to end
LadyXOXO

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