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Array ( [sid] => 15670 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => why wasn't it me?! [time] => 2003-04-06 18:45:00 [hometext] => NO, wat's written below did not happen 4 real... [bodytext] => The knife's shaking in my hand
as i slowly walk on the sand
heading towards that harvester of peace
where is resting "sweet" Elise

As i angrily unbury the dead girl
pulling her by her lifeless fiery curls
i wish she could open her eyes and see
all the rage boiling in me
i wish she could open her mouth and scream
begging her god to make it be a bad dream

Stabbing her as hard as i can with my knife
i wish i was the one who had taken away the life
of that THING so hateable,the daughter of my dad's wife. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 231 [topic] => 43 [informant] => Silent-Cry [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
why wasn't it me?!

Contributed by Silent-Cry on Sunday, 6th April 2003 @ 06:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



The knife's shaking in my hand
as i slowly walk on the sand
heading towards that harvester of peace
where is resting "sweet" Elise

As i angrily unbury the dead girl
pulling her by her lifeless fiery curls
i wish she could open her eyes and see
all the rage boiling in me
i wish she could open her mouth and scream
begging her god to make it be a bad dream

Stabbing her as hard as i can with my knife
i wish i was the one who had taken away the life
of that THING so hateable,the daughter of my dad's wife.




Copyright © Silent-Cry ... [ 2003-04-06 18:45:00]
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Re: why wasn't it me?! (User Rating: 1 )
by wolfflow on Saturday, 19th April 2003 @ 10:52:21 AM AEST
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Whoa!! this is different, i really like it, a mad poem


Re: why wasn't it me?! (User Rating: 1 )
by gina on Sunday, 20th April 2003 @ 12:56:31 PM AEST
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:| but who killed her? ,and wat she'v done , the poor girl , ma 7aram! :@
oh , its not real ! i got carried on hehe

GINA


Re: why wasn't it me?! (User Rating: 1 )
by hardcoreputa on Tuesday, 22nd April 2003 @ 10:04:19 AM AEST
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great poem, truely great angle, the hatered is so raw... keep it up ~Apryl


Re: why wasn't it me?! (User Rating: 1 )
by Chenobi on Sunday, 27th April 2003 @ 02:11:31 PM AEST
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I like it. It's morbid. A lot of anger. Good use of words. Great!


Re: why wasn't it me?! (User Rating: 1 )
by Hiddendarkness1705 on Sunday, 22nd June 2003 @ 12:30:04 PM AEST
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I totally like this poem, you use your emotions well




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