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Array ( [sid] => 156660 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A Lonely Plea [time] => 2010-01-11 20:33:04 [hometext] => I don't think this is very good.. But ehh. [bodytext] => The world is spinning and I can't see straight.
This loneliness offers no escape.
Someone please save me as I hold out this hand;
It seems once again I've lost my true friends.
This world feels so cold that I start to shake
And think that maybe this cold is my fate.
All I want to do is run away,
Escape from this hell that is constantly thrown in my face.
And as I dream of flying far from here,
I suddenly remember that horrid worst fear:
That I'm wrong- They'll need me when they come back.
Still a part of me feels it's just something I lack.
I push people away with every breath;
Somehow I'm still shocked when there's nothing left.
So I'll just dream of the blood again
And cry as I think of the betrayal in that sin. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 210 [topic] => 13 [informant] => ChaosFactor [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

A Lonely Plea

Contributed by ChaosFactor on Monday, 11th January 2010 @ 08:33:04 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

The world is spinning and I can't see straight.
This loneliness offers no escape.
Someone please save me as I hold out this hand;
It seems once again I've lost my true friends.
This world feels so cold that I start to shake
And think that maybe this cold is my fate.
All I want to do is run away,
Escape from this hell that is constantly thrown in my face.
And as I dream of flying far from here,
I suddenly remember that horrid worst fear:
That I'm wrong- They'll need me when they come back.
Still a part of me feels it's just something I lack.
I push people away with every breath;
Somehow I'm still shocked when there's nothing left.
So I'll just dream of the blood again
And cry as I think of the betrayal in that sin.

Copyright © ChaosFactor ... [ 2010-01-11 20:33:04]
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Re: A Lonely Plea (User Rating: 1 )
by sammi23 on Monday, 11th January 2010 @ 08:39:24 PM AEST
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I really liked this poem. It spoke to me in the way that I understood; I've been there and understand. I thought it was put together well in that it displayed all the emotions well.

Re: A Lonely Plea (User Rating: 1 )
by 2bpositive on Wednesday, 10th November 2010 @ 08:57:32 PM AEST
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Hi ChaosFactor,

You should have your head examined.
This is a great piece!

Based on your writing, I think we are related
since words from a heart, could never be imitated
I read your poem, felt your word
to say it's not very good, now that's absurd!

Now, is that understood?

Remember, always 2bpositive!

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