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Array ( [sid] => 15617 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => see you in hell [time] => 2003-04-05 20:25:00 [hometext] => another poem about how much i hate my parents... im trying to leave my house April 16th but probubly wont work until the school year is over... [bodytext] => For years I have hated you,
I'm sure you already knew.
I yell and I scream and I fight.
I try to hurt you with all of my might.
But for years I could do nothing,
Because u never cared about me or anything.
But today I look at you and I grin.
For today I know that I will win.
It wasn’t enough to just despise,
I couldn’t keep hiding behind these lies,
For some reason I have always wanted u to care,
But no matter what, u were never there.
So if u wont be what I need u to be,
Then today is the last u will see me.
I told u this but it had no effect,
U merle thought it was an empty threat.
So I'm leaving today, goodbye, farewell,
Won’t see u again till I see u in hell. [comments] => 6 [counter] => 203 [topic] => 6 [informant] => hardcoreputa [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

see you in hell

Contributed by hardcoreputa on Saturday, 5th April 2003 @ 08:25:00 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

For years I have hated you,
I'm sure you already knew.
I yell and I scream and I fight.
I try to hurt you with all of my might.
But for years I could do nothing,
Because u never cared about me or anything.
But today I look at you and I grin.
For today I know that I will win.
It wasn’t enough to just despise,
I couldn’t keep hiding behind these lies,
For some reason I have always wanted u to care,
But no matter what, u were never there.
So if u wont be what I need u to be,
Then today is the last u will see me.
I told u this but it had no effect,
U merle thought it was an empty threat.
So I'm leaving today, goodbye, farewell,
Won’t see u again till I see u in hell.

Copyright Â© hardcoreputa ... [ 2003-04-05 20:25:00]
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Re: see you in hell (User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on Saturday, 5th April 2003 @ 09:30:51 PM AEST
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Anger fueled by hate and mistrust, a good write.

Re: see you in hell (User Rating: 1 )
by Opium on Sunday, 6th April 2003 @ 07:39:43 AM AEST
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If they really don't care, then you'll be doing them a big favor

Re: see you in hell (User Rating: 1 )
by M on Sunday, 6th April 2003 @ 08:10:15 AM AEST
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Amazing...

Re: see you in hell (User Rating: 1 )
by full_blur on Monday, 7th April 2003 @ 01:15:00 AM AEST
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u rock, the rythmn of this poem is great!

Re: see you in hell (User Rating: 1 )
by wolfflow on Friday, 18th April 2003 @ 04:41:58 PM AEST
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the passion, the strength and depth of feeling, the tempo and motion of it make this a very interesting read

Re: see you in hell (User Rating: 1 )
by Cancer on Monday, 21st April 2003 @ 05:16:31 PM AEST
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bad ass. unbelievably accurate for so many other teens. expressed perfectly. i enjoyed this more each time i re-read it.

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