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Tonight is the night I set the world free
From the demons that live inside of me
Separate my soul from their grip
Deep into the cavern of Hell I will slip

Tonight is the night I go straight and no longer walk in a circle form
I will no longer have to deal with weathering life’s storm
Lay down all defenses and give over total control
This will be the ploy to gather them into one pool

Tonight is the night I will make my last call
To keep you from being sucked into this Hell as off the edge I fall
There will be no fireworks or immediate signs I have completed my task
The evidence will show when the time is right, be patient is all I ask

Tonight as my time on Earth draws to its close
Sad as it is, this is the way it goes
We are not given a set number of years
There is no need for anguish and tears

Tonight I leave behind what is left of my love
Where I am going it is not allowed as it is a gift from above
I leave it behind for those who wish to share
I leave it behind so you know I will always care


Deadwriter
12/19/2009

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Tonight

Contributed by deadwriter on Saturday, 19th December 2009 @ 07:02:09 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



Tonight

Tonight is the night I set the world free
From the demons that live inside of me
Separate my soul from their grip
Deep into the cavern of Hell I will slip

Tonight is the night I go straight and no longer walk in a circle form
I will no longer have to deal with weathering life’s storm
Lay down all defenses and give over total control
This will be the ploy to gather them into one pool

Tonight is the night I will make my last call
To keep you from being sucked into this Hell as off the edge I fall
There will be no fireworks or immediate signs I have completed my task
The evidence will show when the time is right, be patient is all I ask

Tonight as my time on Earth draws to its close
Sad as it is, this is the way it goes
We are not given a set number of years
There is no need for anguish and tears

Tonight I leave behind what is left of my love
Where I am going it is not allowed as it is a gift from above
I leave it behind for those who wish to share
I leave it behind so you know I will always care


Deadwriter
12/19/2009





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Re: Tonight (User Rating: 1 )
by laststarontheleft on Sunday, 20th December 2009 @ 03:30:08 AM AEST
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Very creepy and mysterious, I like it!
Star x x x


Re: Tonight (User Rating: 1 )
by Fuzzy on Sunday, 20th December 2009 @ 10:20:58 AM AEST
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Gave me a bit of a chill down my spine, well written.

Take care.


Tonight as my time on Earth draws to its close
Sad as it is, this is the way it goes
We are not given a set number of years
There is no need for anguish and tears


Re: Tonight (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Sunday, 20th December 2009 @ 05:45:13 PM AEST
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Like Star said, very mysterious....I'd be lying if I said I understood what you're saying here....
Hugs
Jenni


Re: Tonight (User Rating: 1 )
by rfburn on Monday, 21st December 2009 @ 03:11:53 AM AEST
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Spooky - cool




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