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Array ( [sid] => 15602 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Beauty [time] => 2003-04-05 15:25:00 [hometext] => about being with someone who only cares about the outside... [bodytext] => I put on my make-up
And that too tight dress
Walk out the door
Wondering who I'm trying to impress
Your eyes reduce me to nothing
But there's no room to care
Cause as long as I keep this act
There is always a crowd
Full of lonely people
Just like me
That never show the truth
When it has no glamour...
If I can draw perfection
You think I'm ok
As my soul screams in silence
And you walk on by
Like nothing ever happened
But I'll smile just the same
If only you will say
That I looked pretty today [comments] => 8 [counter] => 213 [topic] => 21 [informant] => karoody [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )
Beauty

Contributed by karoody on Saturday, 5th April 2003 @ 03:25:00 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems



I put on my make-up
And that too tight dress
Walk out the door
Wondering who I'm trying to impress
Your eyes reduce me to nothing
But there's no room to care
Cause as long as I keep this act
There is always a crowd
Full of lonely people
Just like me
That never show the truth
When it has no glamour...
If I can draw perfection
You think I'm ok
As my soul screams in silence
And you walk on by
Like nothing ever happened
But I'll smile just the same
If only you will say
That I looked pretty today




Copyright © karoody ... [ 2003-04-05 15:25:00]
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Re: Beauty (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Saturday, 5th April 2003 @ 03:58:13 PM AEST
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Really neat write, Kara...
Jenni


Re: Beauty (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Saturday, 5th April 2003 @ 04:42:42 PM AEST
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Lovely write.
Michelle


Re: Beauty (User Rating: 1 )
by roisin on Saturday, 5th April 2003 @ 05:49:45 PM AEST
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you've described this scene so well...another good write
rosie


Re: Beauty (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Sunday, 6th April 2003 @ 08:39:08 AM AEST
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Wow! really beautiful write.. excellent that you looked very pretty in this poem .smiles dear Kara.. venkat


Re: Beauty (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Sunday, 6th April 2003 @ 08:42:46 AM AEST
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forgot to say I would like to see the beauty of your spirit only. .. smile my friend. venkat


Re: Beauty (User Rating: 1 )
by AngryPrincess on Sunday, 13th April 2003 @ 01:40:25 PM AEST
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good job kara, very well written

Lindsey


Re: Beauty (User Rating: 1 )
by Feelin_Like_A_SadFellow on Monday, 14th April 2003 @ 09:24:39 PM AEST
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your poetry always speaks honesty... even though it may not be as beautiful as you seem =) - Sid


Re: Beauty (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 14th April 2003 @ 09:57:40 PM AEST
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a beautiful write, good message too:)
love n' hugs nessa




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