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too little too late for you.
I really hope that I am wrong.
I wish I could turn back the clock and have understood that your
unhappiness with me would result in this.
Oh how I wish.
They say, “you don’t know what you’ve got until it’s gone.”
How true.
I love you so much that despite all this pain –
I still want it to work. Make it work.
Things could never be the same between us but that could
prove to be a good thing.
If they were nothing would have changed.
We have an opportunity to ‘start anew.’
To hell with what anyone else thinks about it.
I miss you so much.
I know things can’t change overnight and there are lots of
things that need to be discussed.
I just need you to put your arms around me and tell me
that you love and need me.
But only if you really mean it.

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From the sound of it

Contributed by andrewhs on Monday, 7th December 2009 @ 07:52:31 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

From the sound of it, everything that I am trying to do now for us, is
too little too late for you.
I really hope that I am wrong.
I wish I could turn back the clock and have understood that your
unhappiness with me would result in this.
Oh how I wish.
They say, “you don’t know what you’ve got until it’s gone.”
How true.
I love you so much that despite all this pain –
I still want it to work. Make it work.
Things could never be the same between us but that could
prove to be a good thing.
If they were nothing would have changed.
We have an opportunity to ‘start anew.’
To hell with what anyone else thinks about it.
I miss you so much.
I know things can’t change overnight and there are lots of
things that need to be discussed.
I just need you to put your arms around me and tell me
that you love and need me.
But only if you really mean it.

Copyright Â© andrewhs ... [ 2009-12-07 07:52:31]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: From the sound of it (User Rating: 1 )
by laststarontheleft on Monday, 7th December 2009 @ 08:16:55 AM AEST
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Oh Andrew, you never fail to bring a tear
to my eye. Big hugs x
Star x x x

Re: From the sound of it (User Rating: 1 )
by Fuzzy on Monday, 7th December 2009 @ 08:18:44 AM AEST
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This made me shed a tear, great write ,hang in there

Take care.

Re: From the sound of it (User Rating: 1 )
by longhaircg on Monday, 7th December 2009 @ 08:20:07 AM AEST
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Baby I feel your heart so true, keep writing
SP

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