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[aid] => mick
[title] => A Ship.
[time] => 2009-12-06 19:09:47
[hometext] => Comment please and thank you.I wrote this today..Just came to me and I picked up my pen and started writing.And yes..I am 12.
[bodytext] => My God. Theres a ship right beside me, thats bursting into flames.I can barely breathe as they all plead for help. Everyone on board stares at me and says, "We'll all have a peaceful death in the end" The Captain falls to his kness and prays. Parents Jump and leave children in need. A ship thats made its last trip is on the verge off crashing. As it burns to the ground,They all try to keep their heads' above the waves. As we try and keep them alive.. Many make it...but others werent as lucky. But now theyre in a better place. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 216 [topic] => 8 [informant] => KarinaGutierrez121 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AmericanTragedy )
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