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[title] => Him I Lost To Her
[time] => 2003-04-04 22:05:00
[hometext] => This poem I wrote for a person I once loved. But he didn't see me. He saw her.
[bodytext] => My breath became ragged and my face flushed when he neared me. Our eyes met and I poured my heart and soul into him. I trusted him, I loved him. My hands grew clammy and my heart skipped a beat as he let out a slow breath. I parted my lips slightly as he grew closer to my face. He smiled his soft, beautiful smile. But then she came, she came like a harsh wind from behind me. They embrased each other, like lovers of a solid midnight do. My heart fell heavy, like rain on a cloudy day.I felt a tear roll down my cheeck as I walked into the sun.
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Him I Lost To Her
Contributed by
Desi
on
Friday, 4th April 2003 @ 10:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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My breath became ragged and my face flushed when he neared me. Our eyes met and I poured my heart and soul into him. I trusted him, I loved him. My hands grew clammy and my heart skipped a beat as he let out a slow breath. I parted my lips slightly as he grew closer to my face. He smiled his soft, beautiful smile. But then she came, she came like a harsh wind from behind me. They embrased each other, like lovers of a solid midnight do. My heart fell heavy, like rain on a cloudy day.I felt a tear roll down my cheeck as I walked into the sun.
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Re: Him I Lost To Her
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by Mad-Mancunian on
Monday, 14th April 2003 @ 09:38:34 PM AEST
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| MMMMMMM....intriguing, very explicit with human feelings and passions-and yet sorry-I'm not really a guy who likes prose poems!...all I can say is, it's never a pretty thing when you lose your beloved to someone else.... |
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Re: Him I Lost To Her
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 14th April 2003 @ 10:33:40 PM AEST
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Awww..this is so sad..but nicely written
Jenni |
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Re: Him I Lost To Her
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by PhantomsLDY on
Monday, 14th April 2003 @ 11:29:29 PM AEST
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| Great Write |
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Re: Him I Lost To Her
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by Good_King_Bragi on
Monday, 12th May 2003 @ 09:38:09 PM AEST
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| Sorry, can't understand prose poems. I'm frightfully sorry ma'am. |
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