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[aid] => mick
[title] => A Simple Mistake
[time] => 2009-12-04 11:47:58
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[bodytext] => To many raindrops fall On the fire that sparks my room with light The moon reveals to much sight around it all As the fire goes out in the dead of night Why is it people walk on Knowing they will be lost in this wrong turn Nothing is pretty about these walls Their is no beauty in these halls It's all a trick in the mind to help to learn it all But falling in and out doesn't help to much It's to simple to understand all at once When the crown of a king is lifted up And set to high not to be touched It's so hard to see while it's hard to take All thats left of this burning fire is only a mistake [comments] => 2 [counter] => 347 [topic] => 74 [informant] => TheJMan [notes] => Please do not comment on your own work. Your comment on this poem has been removed. You can send someone a private message if you wish to thank them. Thank you. Moderator_18 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 12 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => surreal )
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