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Array ( [sid] => 155245 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => a place he loves [time] => 2009-11-22 09:12:20 [hometext] => [bodytext] => The place he loves

I know im here the gate creaks, as the chain slips ,
why am I here?
I look to you , your eyes betray nothing.
I know the fire is lit, that familiar smell penetrates my senses, stinging my eyes,
Do I see you smile im not sure,
We lay together fire and frost, lust and love,

I listen in the darkness, there’s just the whisper of the trees, and our breath in the night
I watch the shadows dance around from the glow of fire,
My heart aches as I feel the familiar beat of yours,
The tenderness in your touch I want to believe,
Yet I know, reality in time will soon be upon me.

All to soon the illusion has ended ,I feel your body begin to stir
I lay still, I do not want it to end,
I dispel the silent tears that catch in my throat,
Each time we leave, the silence descends ,
another memory to torment my heart..
[comments] => 1 [counter] => 289 [topic] => 2 [informant] => cindyhawkins [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 33 [ratings] => 7 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
a place he loves

Contributed by cindyhawkins on Sunday, 22nd November 2009 @ 09:12:20 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



The place he loves

I know im here the gate creaks, as the chain slips ,
why am I here?
I look to you , your eyes betray nothing.
I know the fire is lit, that familiar smell penetrates my senses, stinging my eyes,
Do I see you smile im not sure,
We lay together fire and frost, lust and love,

I listen in the darkness, there’s just the whisper of the trees, and our breath in the night
I watch the shadows dance around from the glow of fire,
My heart aches as I feel the familiar beat of yours,
The tenderness in your touch I want to believe,
Yet I know, reality in time will soon be upon me.

All to soon the illusion has ended ,I feel your body begin to stir
I lay still, I do not want it to end,
I dispel the silent tears that catch in my throat,
Each time we leave, the silence descends ,
another memory to torment my heart..




Copyright © cindyhawkins ... [ 2009-11-22 09:12:20]
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Re: a place he loves (User Rating: 1 )
by lisahart on Friday, 27th November 2009 @ 09:04:18 AM AEST
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Very good poem mum! Xxx




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